Re: Filled - Part 5/5
anonymous
October 14 2010, 00:47:18 UTC
OP:
Grab a seat; this is going to be long.
I'll try to list everything I LOVED about this fic.
1. Both of them are well aware and totally comfortable with their sexualities. I always love that, and it's far more believable in this day and age than being totally surprised by attraction to the same sex.
2. I was actually expecting the fill to have John start out calling Sherlock all those nasty things at first, then switching gears when he found out it wasn't welcome. Your idea was SO MUCH BETTER, and more in character, I think. John's too sweet to be mean.
3. I’d have moved into a bloody broom cupboard if you’d wanted it.
What a thing to say in bed! *fans self* That shouldn't have been as hot as it was.
4. Sherlock getting surprised and shy to be so completely praised during sex. Them exes did a number on him. *growl*
5. Surprise hair-pets and cuddles! Really showed now no one's taken care of Sherlock in the past. :( No worries now, though.
6. And he would tell John so. But… not right now.
Yeah, just go ahead and marinate in TLC and sweet, sweet lovin'. I think he's earned it.
LOVE YOU SO MUCH! Have a puppy in a cuddly sweater.
Author!Anon saying thank you kindly!
anonymous
October 14 2010, 17:34:28 UTC
*gasp* Wheee! I always wanted a puppy! And look at his little jumper! Thank you!
I'm so pleased you liked it, especially since it didn't quite fit the original prompt in that John didn't start using those terms to Sherlock. Try as I might, I just couldn't hear it in my mind & so it ended up being a bit different.
But I'm so happy that you enjoyed it! Thanks for the praise *blushes*
Re: Filled - Part 5/5
anonymous
June 27 2012, 19:51:34 UTC
Agreeing with this so much! I rarely like reading JohnLock fics, no one ever seems to get it right. It's usually just awkward smut for the sake of smut. But this? This has FEELS and attraction, and things that make it SO AMAZING. Well written!
Saw it floating about Tumblr and it definitely deserved the rec it had!
Grab a seat; this is going to be long.
I'll try to list everything I LOVED about this fic.
1. Both of them are well aware and totally comfortable with their sexualities. I always love that, and it's far more believable in this day and age than being totally surprised by attraction to the same sex.
2. I was actually expecting the fill to have John start out calling Sherlock all those nasty things at first, then switching gears when he found out it wasn't welcome. Your idea was SO MUCH BETTER, and more in character, I think. John's too sweet to be mean.
3. I’d have moved into a bloody broom cupboard if you’d wanted it.
What a thing to say in bed! *fans self* That shouldn't have been as hot as it was.
4. Sherlock getting surprised and shy to be so completely praised during sex. Them exes did a number on him. *growl*
5. Surprise hair-pets and cuddles! Really showed now no one's taken care of Sherlock in the past. :( No worries now, though.
6. And he would tell John so. But… not right now.
Yeah, just go ahead and marinate in TLC and sweet, sweet lovin'. I think he's earned it.
LOVE YOU SO MUCH! Have a puppy in a cuddly sweater.
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I'm so pleased you liked it, especially since it didn't quite fit the original prompt in that John didn't start using those terms to Sherlock. Try as I might, I just couldn't hear it in my mind & so it ended up being a bit different.
But I'm so happy that you enjoyed it! Thanks for the praise *blushes*
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Saw it floating about Tumblr and it definitely deserved the rec it had!
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