Prompting Part XXVII

Mar 10, 2012 20:31

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John + anyone, an (un)cuddle fic anonymous March 12 2012, 14:00:04 UTC
Ok, so I want platonic touching for kind of touch-starved John, but not...schmoopy? I don't really want fluffy fluff. Or sugary sweetness. (don't get me wrong, some days I love a good cuddle fic, but this is not that day, k?).

So what I'm looking for is that John who's...confidant with women, but when not dating doesn't touch as much on a daily basis. Who maybe has not yet reached that flatmate comfort we see in series 2 where he and Sherlock are constantly in each other's space. So show me John a little missing touch but not to the point where he'd ask for it (you know, like you'd miss your favorite type of tea while living abroad, or a ring when you're not wearing it), sometimes getting little passing touches but not hugs? Or maybe the progression into that series 2 comfort? I don't know...kind of sad but satisfying, please. *vague hand waving*

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Re: John + anyone, an (un)cuddle fic percygranger March 12 2012, 21:15:32 UTC
This is great. I have a yen to see some platonic touching, too.

Seconding.

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Re: John + anyone, an (un)cuddle fic anonymous March 15 2012, 09:15:35 UTC
Just to clarify, would it be ok if Sherlock or Lestrade maybe twigged what was going on and started to provide some platonic almost-accidental touching? Or is that too fluffy?

Basically: Is the point that John doesn't get the touching he wants or is it ok if he gets it after pining for it for a while?

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OP here anonymous March 15 2012, 10:24:16 UTC
I would be fine with some almost-accidental touching, if that's the direction you want to go! I'm just picturing an overall tone of quiet sadness, but I'm not at all opposed to quiet fixing toward the end? I can easily picture either Sherlock or Lestrade cottoning on to the problem.

Vague OP is vague--sorry. I'd be very happy to see anything you want to write. :)

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Re: OP here anonymous March 17 2012, 01:44:38 UTC
No worries, I am working on it.

And I can definitely relate to John! I have so been there. Americans all have this weird space bubble and my hugging friends were a continent away.

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Re: John + anyone, an (un)cuddle fic fennishjournal April 10 2012, 14:00:43 UTC
So, for some reason this took ages to write and I am not sure whether it turned into what you were looking for. Um. Apologies?

It also turned out to be rather longer than anticipated, so you can find it here.

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Re: John + anyone, an (un)cuddle fic anonymous April 10 2012, 14:04:04 UTC
"page not found" D:

*OP making grabby hands*

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Re: John + anyone, an (un)cuddle fic fennishjournal April 10 2012, 14:09:48 UTC
God, one day I will be able to post a link without borking the html. But apparently this is not the day. I have edited the above comment and the link should work now.

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Re: John + anyone, an (un)cuddle fic fennishjournal April 10 2012, 14:11:07 UTC
Gah, and that didn't work either. I give up.

Here: http://fennishjournal.livejournal.com/5860.html

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Re: John + anyone, an (un)cuddle fic anonymous April 10 2012, 15:01:46 UTC
OP again. *bookmarks* Thank you so much for this fill.

This was absolutely worth the wait. I felt bad for prompting such a vague tone-y thing, but apparently it didn't hold you back. I don't know that I've ever seen a fic that is so perfectly in line with my headcanon and so full of just platonic, quotidian longing. Some favorite bits, although it's so hard to pick:

There were casual slaps on the back, quick squeezes of shoulders and arms. Firm grips when equipment or wounds needed to be checked. Mates leaning against each other tiredly.

one big messy sprawl on his bedroom floor...thoughtlessly intimate

He sits next to Sherlock on the couch and feels the physical distance between them like a painful ache....He is worried that at some point, when Sherlock stands right in front of him and John is very tired, he will turn around and realise that John is seriously fighting the urge to just lean forward and rest his head against Sherlock's back. But he never does.John settling for picking someone up was just right (including his ( ... )

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Re: John + anyone, an (un)cuddle fic fennishjournal April 10 2012, 16:32:14 UTC
Oh wow, I don't think I have ever gotten such a detailed comment before. Thank you so much! I am glad I was able to capture the tone of your prompt, especially since this story was strangely hard to write. I really loved your prompt but then it sat there and just wouldn't budge for the longest time.

The childhood friends puppy pile might or might not have been take straight from my own experience. :-)

Re: Strongbow - I have to admit that I have a secret weakness for it but all my British friends always tease me mercilessly about it so I have learned how to pretend to have taste. ;-)

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Re: John + anyone, an (un)cuddle fic anonymous April 27 2012, 01:51:46 UTC
OP

Caught the sequel fill on another prompt too, which was also a pleasure to read.

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Re: John + anyone, an (un)cuddle fic fennishjournal April 27 2012, 06:19:27 UTC
Thanks a lot!

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Re: John + anyone, an (un)cuddle fic anonymous April 27 2012, 01:42:05 UTC
Um, would a second fill be out of place?

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Re: John + anyone, an (un)cuddle fic anonymous April 27 2012, 01:53:10 UTC
OP

Please join in! The more the merrier, as far as I'm concerned.

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Re: John + anyone, an (un)cuddle fic anonymous July 2 2012, 03:48:37 UTC
Would-be auth-anon still here. It's actually reversed itself in my head to where Sherlock is the touch-starved one, and doesn't know how to cope with John's platonic physical contact.

Proceed, make a new prompt and fill there, abort retry fail y/n?

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