Prompting Part XXV

Jan 29, 2012 15:13

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Fill: Very Sincerely 1/5or6 sheepnamedpig January 31 2012, 07:43:40 UTC
WOAH, AU TIME. This meandered a teensy bit off prompt, mostly because I was having too much fun with John and Jim. I thought about fleshing it out a little more, but I decided to work the prompt into the background rather than going back and changing the actual episodes. So the usual warnings: unbeta'd, poorly written, OOC John the likes of which you've probably never seen before, spoilers, etc.

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The Watsons find him on their doorstep, swaddled in a threadbare blanket. Tucked in the folds is a sealed envelope addressed To Hamish, when he is grown.

Hamish, they say, what an old-fashioned name. Let Hamish be his middle name, and we'll call him John.

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John Hamish is a brilliant child, so brilliant that his parents worry about him attending school with the normal children. After a few weeks, he seems to settle in, to adjust, to descend to the intellectual level of his peers and his adoptive parents breathe a little sigh of relief.

John is brilliant, knows that he's far and away more intelligent than the other children, but it' ( ... )

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Fill: Very Sincerely 2/5or6 sheepnamedpig January 31 2012, 07:45:04 UTC
M is very good at hiding, but John is very patient. Most people think in terms of days and weeks, but men like them think in terms of years and decades. John knows this and knows that M will never be satisfied with the limited influence of the minor government position he currently holds. M will rise to the more sparsely populated ranks of the truly influential and when that happens, John will be watching ( ... )

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Fill: Very Sincerely 3/5or6 sheepnamedpig January 31 2012, 07:46:29 UTC
Sherlock Holmes is hilarious. John would laugh if it didn't mean breaking his carefully crafted façade of normalcy. Sherlock is brilliance heaped on even more brilliance, but he has the attention span of an infant and no discipline whatsoever. Still, it's not healthy to stay indoors and conquer the world from his laptop, so he chases Sherlock around London, stumping along on his metal cane and pretending, always, always pretending, getting so tired of pretending, to be just a shred above normal.

A phone rings. John ignores it. Anyone who really needs to contact him knows to go through Jim.

A second phone rings. Two data points is enough to graph a basic line. Someone else picks it up before he does, though, and he moves on.

Third time's the charm. John picks up the ringing phone in the booth and is not impressed by the caller's little CCTV trick. He is, however, a little impressed that he doesn't actually know who it is that's trying to impress him, so he gets in the black sedan without fuss ( ... )

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Fill: Very Sincerely 4/5or6 sheepnamedpig January 31 2012, 07:48:00 UTC
John has never been properly kidnapped before, and aside from the absolutely galling irony that he has been mistaken for the likes of Sherlock Holmes, it's quite fun. John especially enjoys the part where he has to save the damsel in distress while the sandbag timer ticks gram by gram to zero. The whole thing plays out like a Bond film or something equally camp, and after all is said and done, James has a few stern words with Jim regarding the quality of their Asian associates and the reputation those associates are expected to live up to.

Jim accepts responsibility with what looks on the surface to be fanatical devotion, but James has been a pretender too long to not notice the grudging reluctance Jim is hiding ( ... )

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Fill: Very Sincerely 5/6 sheepnamedpig January 31 2012, 07:50:16 UTC
Irene Adler is very beautiful and very intelligent. She and Sherlock would make incredible offspring if only either of them were interested. She's not perfect, of course, already too caught up in the game even though it's only just started, and that's enough for John to lose interest in her.

She's not much, not without his and Jim's help, but at least she's funny.

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John watches the footage of Adler's execution with a touch of regret. She and Sherlock really would've made spectacular children. He puts a copy of the video in the file bound for Mycroft. It had been a bit of a challenge keeping his own terrorist cell hidden from both Mycroft and Sherlock, but they'd stayed hidden until the Holmeses and their respective coteries had cleared out before catching Adler again and giving her a proper beheading. The head was on ice somewhere, tucked away for a rainy day.

He picks up his phone and texts Jim.

Ask him about Sherlock's past, would you?There's no reply, but James figures Jim is a little busy with the MI-5 operatives that ( ... )

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Fill: Very Sincerely 6/6 sheepnamedpig January 31 2012, 07:51:33 UTC
Good morning, Mr. Holmes.

What do you want, Moriarty?

Just to say 'I warned you'.

A rather Pyrrhic victory, don't you think? After all, you lost your brother just as surely as I lost mine.

Wrong in every particular. Jim wasn't my brother. Moriarty wasn't even his real last name. And I lost him when you broke him.

You sent him to me.

I underestimated you. Congratulations. It won't happen again.

What do you want from me?

Your word that you'll stay out of my way.

Or what? What do I have left to lose?

Everything. Everyone you know, everyone that knew the real Sherlock, everything you've ever accomplished, everything that you might still accomplish. And your life, I suppose, though I usually try not to make such pedestrian threats.

Fine. You win. I forfeit the game.

You mean that?

Very sincerely.

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Re: Fill: Very Sincerely 6/6 sheepnamedpig January 31 2012, 10:51:39 UTC
Deliciously dark! I thought it was very interesting that the battle was really between Moriarty and Mycroft, not Sherlock.

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Re: Fill: Very Sincerely 6/6 sheepnamedpig February 1 2012, 00:02:37 UTC
The best chocolate always is. I always thought it was kinda unfair that Sherlock got an enemy to match wits against but Mycroft never did, so it was great fun to try to write someone who would be worthy of locking horns with him. I don't know how well I succeeded, but thanks for reading.

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Re: Fill: Very Sincerely 6/6 lbmisscharlie January 31 2012, 12:28:32 UTC
Oh, this is good. I like that Mycroft is Moriarty's real match, and the parallels of their "brothers" and the undercurrents of betrayal.

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Re: Fill: Very Sincerely 6/6 sheepnamedpig February 1 2012, 00:05:54 UTC
Glad you liked it! There's a lot of parallels, and almost all of them were accidental. Once I had Jim as James' adopted Moriarty brother, everything just kinda wrote itself, even the betrayals. Sherlock and Jim are each other, but I think James and Mycroft are also mirror images of each other.

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Re: Fill: Very Sincerely 6/6 sheepnamedpig January 31 2012, 13:52:01 UTC
This. Was. Brilliant.

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Re: Fill: Very Sincerely 6/6 sheepnamedpig February 1 2012, 00:07:04 UTC
Glad. You. Liked.

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Re: Fill: Very Sincerely 6/6 sheepnamedpig January 31 2012, 20:08:33 UTC
OP here. Dear god, this is wonderful and brilliant and amazing. This is something I was hoping for, and more. Absolutely lovely.

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Re: Fill: Very Sincerely 6/6 sheepnamedpig February 1 2012, 00:11:39 UTC
HI OP! I'm glad you're satisfied with it! It was a little choppier than I'd originally planned, since it's written around the episodes rather than in them as I'd intended to do at first. Except, the story isn't about Sherlock, so it seemed inappropriate to delve too much into Sherlock's side of the story.

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Re: Fill: Very Sincerely 6/6 sheepnamedpig February 1 2012, 11:51:52 UTC
this fill is simply sublime. wow, so blown away by how perfect this is.

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Re: Fill: Very Sincerely 6/6 sheepnamedpig February 1 2012, 17:56:29 UTC
Wow, thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed reading it. I certainly enjoyed writing it!

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