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prompting part XXIII

Dec 25, 2011 21:12

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Fill: Love Letters 1a/? (TW for blood-play and non-con) anonymous January 6 2012, 00:35:56 UTC

A/N: I started to write this but I have no idea how to finish! How were you thinking, OP anon? Also, I made a load of things up so please correct me viscously. I hope it's okay.

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The first letter wasn’t even recognised for what it was until well after its arrival.

It had turned up with all the other post in a neat envelope, first class stamp and handwritten address. ‘Doctor John Watson’, it had said in a feminine scrawl. ‘221B Baker Street, NW1 6XE, London’. Curious John had opened it, read it, and then quickly put the pink, heart covered card back in its envelope with an expression warring between flattered and embarrassed (embarrassed was wining). He slid it onto the living room table between some books and a stack of railway timetables, not quite knowing what else to do with it ( ... )

Fill: Love Letters 1b/? (TW for blood-play and non-con) anonymous January 6 2012, 00:39:49 UTC

“So?” John argued if for the sake of arguing, though he didn’t bother trying to get the card back; he’d resigned it to being lost the moment he’d seen it in Sherlock’s hands. “Loads of people fold paper twice when making cards. Maybe she only had an A4 bit of paper and a A6 envelope ( ... )

Fill: Love Letters 1c/? (TW for blood-play and non-con) anonymous January 6 2012, 00:40:34 UTC

An awkward, crawling silence. John swallowed, though it did nothing to dispel the nausea sitting in the back of his throat. Fuck. He swallowed again, offered the card back to Sherlock who stared at it blankly for a second before taking it. Was this a threat? Did Moriarty really mean this or was it just another sick way of - of what? Was it a clue of some sort? Simple harassment ( ... )

Re: Fill: Love Letters 1c/? (TW for blood-play and non-con) anonymous January 6 2012, 01:04:15 UTC

This is an excellent start. I love how the love-letter goes mostly forgotten for over a week before they realize what's going on; it makes for a wonderfully creepy slow build because I know what the prompt is.

Very creative with the letter, both that the creepy part is hidden in a way that only Sherlock would figure out, and the creativity of Jim's imagination.

Looking forward to the rest!

Re: Fill: Love Letters 1c/? (TW for blood-play and non-con) anonymous January 6 2012, 01:22:55 UTC

OP here and SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT this is everything I wanted and more! I'm ashamed to say how much I enjoyed Moriarty's letter, and just how ridiculously excited I am to see what he has to say next. He's a sick fuck, but there's something satisfying about how horrifying you've already made him.

I especially love the detail you put into the make of the letter; it really felt like I was watching the show, having Sherlock point out all the 'important' bits. It was quite fascinating. Even though you haven't written much yet, both John and Sherlock seem perfectly in character too; you've done a fabulous job so far.

Hope to see more of this soon, anon! ♥

As for the ending? I'm pretty open to whatever you want, though I would prefer both John and Sherlock live. Everyone else...and whatever you want to do to them...is up to you, I suppose. I didn't think that far ahead tbh, so it'll be a pleasant (or unpleasant) surprise!

Re: Fill: Love Letters 1c/? (TW for blood-play and non-con) anonymous January 7 2012, 01:51:13 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so glad it's okay, haha, I did use one of the milder scenarios I've thus thought up. Thank you again!

Re: Fill: Love Letters 1c/? (TW for blood-play and non-con) anonymous January 7 2012, 03:11:48 UTC

Since this is only the beginning, I had a feeling you decided to go tame. XD Still creepy, but I'm looking forward to the worst of the worst too!

Re: Fill: Love Letters 1c/? (TW for blood-play and non-con) obscuriglobus January 6 2012, 03:52:07 UTC

Creepy and wonderful :)

Re: Fill: Love Letters 1c/? (TW for blood-play and non-con) nejem January 6 2012, 17:46:35 UTC

This is so bloody creepy but so wonderfully written too *_*

Re: Fill: Love Letters 1c/? (TW for blood-play and non-con) anonymous January 7 2012, 13:14:01 UTC

please do continue! it's an awesome start.

Re: Fill: Love Letters 1c/? (TW for blood-play and non-con) anonymous January 8 2012, 01:32:50 UTC

This is such a brilliant start, I hope you continue! Is it sick that I absolutely love Moriarty's plans for John?

Fill: Love Letters 2a/? (TW for starvation and forced self harm) anonymous January 9 2012, 00:37:12 UTC

A/N: thank you every one so much who commented :D ( ... )

Fill: Love Letters 2b/? (TW for starvation and forced self harm) luthier January 9 2012, 00:38:26 UTC

Sherlock was in the bathroom as John passed on the way to his room, for whatever reason lying on the floor and surrounded by an array of bottles. He was turned to look up at the door when John glanced in, but didn’t say anything. His eyes flickered unsubtly to the letter in John’s hand ( ... )

Re: Fill: Love Letters 2b/? (TW for starvation and forced self harm) anonymous January 9 2012, 01:10:31 UTC

OP feels a bit guilty replying to this because of your anon fail (you might have wanted to repost...sorry!), but I assure you there's nothing to be ashamed of beautiful author; tbh this is my favorite thing IN THE WORLD right now. I am basically as excited for updates of this as I am the show, because your Moriarty is SPOT ON.

Seriously, he's deliciously evil and spectacularly gross and I want him to send John letters forever. I'm an awful person.

Still, I DO feel sorry for John, how he's looking left and right, constantly aware that Moriarty could strike at any moment. Being that anxious and aware all the time must be unbearable.

Please do, John; I’ll be so unbelievably turned on if you do.

This sentence sounds a bit similar to something he said on the show before, you know? And I love that. I can hear the entire thing in his voice, but that line I particularly liked.

I guess that’s just part of why I love you so much.SO. DAMN. CREEPY ( ... )

Re: Fill: Love Letters 2b/? (TW for starvation and forced self harm) luthier January 10 2012, 18:27:14 UTC

Oh I don't even know why I try to post anon, I always fail. But - thank you so much c: Jim Moriarty is a petty mess to write so I'm glad you think he's okay here.

Jim's pretty Irish voice. Mmmmm. I almost don't want the last episode...

Thank you again!

Re: Fill: Love Letters 2b/? (TW for starvation and forced self harm) anonymous January 9 2012, 02:24:09 UTC

Your voices for John and Moriarty are just perfect. Moriarty is wonderfully creepy. Can't wait to see where this all goes!

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