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Fic: When the Rain Washes You Clean You'll Know- by linziday

Jul 14, 2009 22:07

Title: When the Rain Washes You Clean You'll Know

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Comments 16

padawan_aneiki July 15 2009, 02:34:42 UTC

Ahh, interesting lead-in. :) Guess things change up pretty quickly for them. ;)

linziday July 15 2009, 02:42:36 UTC

Thanks. I wasn't extremely happy with the way it came out, so I'm glad it read okay!

padawan_aneiki July 15 2009, 02:37:23 UTC

And you should do a follow-up, after the eps. ;)

linziday July 15 2009, 02:43:21 UTC

Ha! Now that would be interesting!

writerjc July 15 2009, 02:46:40 UTC

Oh, this is WONDERFUL! So many things to love. This absolutely cracked me up:

::But he’s not cleared for missions, Carson won’t let him fly a jumper, and Teyla laughs at him when he suggests sparring. (Actually, she offers him her best diplomatic smile and suggests he might find meditating in his quarters soothing. So. Same thing.):: LOL!

And Rodney & John's apology/makeup/argument scene, pitch perfect. Hearts!

linziday July 15 2009, 02:51:33 UTC

*hugs* Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

The line you quoted is one of my favorites, too-- tweaked with help from beta sharpes_hussy.

ditraveler July 15 2009, 05:57:49 UTC

wow I loved it!
it was very well written I love the dialogue I kind of want to read what will happen next.

linziday July 16 2009, 00:35:09 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :)

ditraveler July 15 2009, 06:04:10 UTC

I love your writing, write more!
Another one please!

linziday July 16 2009, 00:36:50 UTC

*blushes* Aw, thank you!!

Most of my other SGA fics are posted here if you want to see more: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1398010/