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Fic: Like Broken Glass (tag for Spoils of War)

Jan 12, 2008 10:25

Title: Like Broken Glass
Author: Merlin7/clarkangel
Disclaimer: Not mine
Spoilers: Spoils of War
Rating: T
Archive: Anywhere
Summary: Sheppard angst with some whump dumped in (because that's what I do). What happened in the aftermath of Spoils of War.

LIKE BROKEN GLASS

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4th season episode tags, author-clarkangel, fiction-john, fiction-whump

Comments 13

padawan_aneiki January 12 2008, 16:54:52 UTC

AWWW! Me likes. :) Nicely done, m'dear.

clarkangel January 12 2008, 21:11:04 UTC

Thank you so much!

karri_kln1671 January 12 2008, 18:07:01 UTC

Oooooh, fantastic! I enjoyed that very much. :D The show always brushes off the trauma for the body when so much crap happens to it in one epi. Love to see it dealt with in tags. :D

clarkangel January 12 2008, 21:13:18 UTC

Thanks muchly. I wish the show had the time to show us what Shep is really going through. I also hope tons of Shep whump tags are written for this ep. :D

linzi5 January 12 2008, 20:23:08 UTC

Wonderful! Just what I needed to complete this episode! You always make the whump from episodes thar one step further, yet they're so believable, and, well, totally yummy! I hope you'll continue to do this for new episodes!? Thanks for sharing! :)

linzi5 January 12 2008, 20:25:31 UTC

Ok so I tried to delete my comment above and it wouldn't! What my review SHOULD have said, is:

Wonderful! Just what I needed to complete this episode! You always take the whump from episodes that one step further, yet they're so believable, and, well, totally yummy! I hope you'll continue to do this for new episodes!? Thanks for sharing! :)

clarkangel January 12 2008, 21:12:25 UTC

Thank you thank you thank you! Ya know. I had started doing that before the break. Writing a tag to every ep to put more Shep Whump in there. I think I've been inspired to do it again. :D

kristen999 January 12 2008, 21:17:39 UTC

A very nice coda and I think you hit the nail right on the head. The Team is fragmented now with a cog missing and it will never be the same with the baby. I feel John's world crumbling away and I enjoyed your extension into the headache form the Wraith queen.

Seems each time he's interrogated by a Queen of late, its been a worse type of torment. Loved you wrapping it all together.

clarkangel January 12 2008, 21:58:18 UTC

Thankee. He's certainly made the rounds with the Queens, and I wish just once the ep would deal with repercussions from it. Especially since this Queen stated just how strong John's resistance is. You can't tell me that doesn't give him a headache, and combine it with all the other stuff he's been dealing with in just a few months...the man is only human after all. :D