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starbuckssue in sheppard_hc

fic: silenced by the night

Dec 29, 2012 21:29

Title: Silenced by the Night
Author: starbuckssue
Recipient: brynnh87
Word Count: 6,300
Rating: G
Warnings: John with amnesia, mention of torture but nothing graphic.
Summary: He didn’t remember his life before the cell, so when the strangers appeared at the door he didn’t know what to expect.
Author Notes: I came late to SGA and this is only my third story in ( Read more... )

secret santa 2012, genre: angst, genre: gen, genre: hurt/comfort, rating: g, character: rodney mckay, character: john sheppard

Comments 10

nacinom December 30 2012, 03:41:44 UTC

Well done! I liked the way you had Rodney be the one person John trusted the most despite his amnesia.

starbuckssue December 30 2012, 21:10:29 UTC

Thank you, and John certainly did get his chance to make it up to Rodney in the end!

itacountrygirl December 30 2012, 12:26:06 UTC

Love it i like how McKay helped John and how McKay was the rock o John. There's one little mistake it's RONON and NOT RONAN, i don't know why but several writers keep on spelling the name wrong

starbuckssue December 30 2012, 21:09:23 UTC

Thank you for your comments and for pointing out the mistake so I could correct it. I can't believe I did that, I KNOW Ronon's name is spelled with an o not an a - I would have been so annoyed if I'd noticed it later on!

lcshepp December 30 2012, 20:02:06 UTC

Nice Job! It's tucked in my Kindle as we speak.

Any more stories up your sleeve?

starbuckssue December 30 2012, 21:13:30 UTC

Thank you, hopefully there will be more stories. I'm not the most prolific writer in the world and I'm only just really getting into SGA, I really need to watch the series' through a few more times to become more familiar with the characters and situations they've been in.

brynnh87 January 6 2013, 04:04:44 UTC

WOW! I LOVE my Christmas Present!! Thank you. That was wonderfully done. I LOVE amnesia fics and I love John and Rodney friendship. This was just beautiful.

starbuckssue January 13 2013, 11:33:53 UTC

Hi, I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I was a definite latecomer to SGA (ie last year) so am still getting my head around the characters but I really enjoyed writing this. I had to let John get his memory back though as I couldn't see them letting him stay on Atlantis if he couldn't do his job.

stella_pegasi January 6 2013, 15:24:09 UTC

Lovely story...the bond between Sheppard and McKay is one of my favorite subjects. The most unlikely of friends, yet they found out how to be just that.

Thanks...enjoyed.