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Feb 13, 2010 10:47

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canadian_jay February 13 2010, 00:25:49 UTC

*happy sigh* A happy ending! Egad! I scarce dared hope. Very nice, very touching.

Might you be wanting a quick beta, m'dear? I spotted a number of little things that could be fixed.

sheneya February 13 2010, 00:34:54 UTC

Glad you like.

Yes, a Beta would be very nice, this chapter is a little muddled.....are you offering?

canadian_jay February 13 2010, 00:35:35 UTC

I am indeed. ^^

sheneya February 13 2010, 00:37:07 UTC

Well then yes please, anything I need to do?

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knitekat February 13 2010, 01:11:55 UTC

Yay for a happy ending. And yep, Connor's feeling better.

sheneya February 13 2010, 01:13:57 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad it was ok, this chapter was a little nuts for me.

auntypam February 13 2010, 04:25:23 UTC

Oh so lovely*sigh* a happy ending:)

sheneya February 13 2010, 04:36:50 UTC

Thank you, I had to fight my muses tooth and nail for a happy ending.

echo_fangirl February 13 2010, 06:57:19 UTC

Aww, snuggles for all of them. :) And yay for surprise supportive Duncan!

sheneya February 13 2010, 07:07:50 UTC

Thank you, I felt that Duncan deserved some recognition, he vanished after Tom (Connor's friend not Captain Ryan) died.

I wonder why Cutter didn't decide to join those two up, surely a well-made animatronic dinosaur made as quickly as those two made it in episode 2 could come in really handy for when they need to move a large number of dinos through an anomaly.

especially if they could get some recordings from the predators that come through all the time.

bigtitch February 13 2010, 08:19:46 UTC

YAY!!! A happy ending. I LIKE happy endings.

And it was really nice to see Duncan as well.
And I just know Connor is going to milk this for all that it's worth!

sheneya February 13 2010, 08:29:28 UTC

Thank you, I was worried it was a little stilted, but canadian_jay helped out a lot, so it turned out better than I was expecting.

I'm glad you liked.

Now I just have to get someone to write an AU where Tom and Duncan join the Anomaly project.

Really, I'm very surprised Cutter didn't see the possible need for the animatronic dinosaur they made in episode 2.

having what appears to be a large predator on hand would have definitely made moving any herbivores easier if used right.

and they made the episode 2 prankosaur really fast as well, so they could do pretty much any type of predator on demand.

Sorry, where was I...Oh yeah, glad you liked the fic.