Title: But I didn't feel like "just a friend" Author: shemp_o2stk Pairing: Zen Disclaimer: I don't own these characters or the show but if I had the right to show them on my imaginary network, gosh darn it I would!
Awesome story like the way you wove between the spoken words and then the true thoughts (such as the last line) - very nice juxtaposition - can not wait to read more (yes I am pushy and assuming there is more coming o- :)
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Contagious isn't it! ( writing I mean)lol
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My next idea is set around that time too. watch this space
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However the last thought is meant to be ambiguous, I don't know which one thought..."I wanted her."
I dunno if there'll be more of that one, but I do have an idea for another short one.
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