Minuet of Spring

[vatelle]

Author: vatelle
Title: Conquering
Category: Fanfiction
Pairings/Characters: Sheik/Link
Rating: PG
Word Count: 600

Song: No More - Three Days Grace (Youtube with lyrics)Notes: It's based around two scenes: Kakariko Village and then the last meeting in the Temple of Time. I cut out a lot of the dialogue because of the word count.

Well I'm sorry for the late entry

Comments

[zeffyface]

Oooh, this was lovely! I liked the reversal of roles you had in the two scenes - each boy needing their comfort in a moment of fear. And the meeting point in the Temple of Time has always been a favorite of mine, so charged with emotion and things unsaid. I love the conflict you show in poor Sheik here too. It's amazing what you've fit into 600 words, because writing this condensed is no easy task.

Link'll find Sheik, I believe!

[vatelle]

Oh my >///////< Thank you. I'm glad the reversal of the roles played out well.
I was having a bit of trouble near the end myself so that explained enough for coherency but short enough so that it fit into the word-count. ((And I had to do this without my usual html codes since it would otherwise throw off the wordcount xD)
AND I BELIEVE THAT TOO!
I was also afraid I wouldn't have captured the main element in the song, but just had enough~