Espionage | Prologue

[shegeki]

Title: Espionage
Rating: PG-15[for violence and swearing]
Pairing: Kyuhyun/Donghae
Summary: Donghae is suddenly forced to live in hiding with only one other person to trust. One other person he doesn't know.
Notes: 507 words. It only a prologue, so it's sort of short. It doesn't necessarily make sense right now. It's not supposed to anyway.

Comments

[miuratenshi]

Yay for KyuHae! ♥ I like it so far!

[shegeki]

I love Kyuhae too. Thank you[for saying you like it and for the comment :D]

[zhenli]

spot for coregee.

i will be back after dance practice, =). /wails, i want to read this right now! gr. well at least i have a spot of my own.

=D

[shegeki]

I didn't know you dance ?!?!?

Yes, you do have a spot for yourself. I'll wait for your comment.

[zhenli]

been dancing all my life. xD

this was really good, i found a couple mistakes but for a first time writing this was fantastic. i've read a lot of fics from people who have been writing for months to years and they aren't nearly as good as you. so bravo! =D

you mentioned in your authors note that you needed a beta. i am known for being a beta on occasion. so if you want, i would love to beta your work. =). send me a message if you want me to.

[shegeki]

Oh thank you! I'm glad you think so highly of me. :DD

I do need a beta....maybe I'll ask you when I'm ready with the next chapter.....

[genma4600]

this is very good for your first time writing.

[shegeki]

Thank you!

I had this written ages ago but wasn't sure I was good at this writing thing.HAHA.

[bidachii]

Liking it so far!:D
A few words error but it's not that much of a damage :) Still understand what you were trying to say :)
A little late for "YAAAAY KYUHAE!!*flails*"
Keep it up! I didn't know this was your first fic O_o

[shegeki]

I'm glad you like it.

Oh I didn't notice those.,I'll get my real friend to look it over

It's never to late for Kyuhae flailing. *flails with you*

I didn't mention it because i didn't want anyone to know :|

[kyu_x3]

READ
hehe :P
KYUHAEEE :D *flails arms madly*
can't wait for more, i have a soft spot for kyuhyun+donghae ;D
~looking forward to 1st chapter ^^

[shegeki]

I knew someone would be cheeky enough to say that. ILU

I love Kyuhae too. :DDDD

I know you do. You wrote "My Everything" right? The one with Kyuhae and broken!Kyumin?

Thank you!