Espionage | Prologue

[shegeki]

Title: Espionage
Rating: PG-15[for violence and swearing]
Pairing: Kyuhyun/Donghae
Summary: Donghae is suddenly forced to live in hiding with only one other person to trust. One other person he doesn't know.
Notes: 507 words. It only a prologue, so it's sort of short. It doesn't necessarily make sense right now. It's not supposed to anyway.

Comments

[zhenli]

spot for coregee.

i will be back after dance practice, =). /wails, i want to read this right now! gr. well at least i have a spot of my own.

=D

[shegeki]

I didn't know you dance ?!?!?

Yes, you do have a spot for yourself. I'll wait for your comment.

[zhenli]

been dancing all my life. xD

this was really good, i found a couple mistakes but for a first time writing this was fantastic. i've read a lot of fics from people who have been writing for months to years and they aren't nearly as good as you. so bravo! =D

you mentioned in your authors note that you needed a beta. i am known for being a beta on occasion. so if you want, i would love to beta your work. =). send me a message if you want me to.

[shegeki]

Oh thank you! I'm glad you think so highly of me. :DD

I do need a beta....maybe I'll ask you when I'm ready with the next chapter.....

[zhenli]

=DD i do.

all right sounds good, =)

[shegeki]

Oh....that was a quick comment. XD.

Thank you so much. :D

[zhenli]

i know, ninja fast skill, yes? =d. actually i was just checking my e-mail and it popped up as soon as i logged in. =) yay!

no problem. seriously, this story is going to amazing and full of epicness; i can just feel it.

also side note - i think i'll have the next chap to your story up by like friday? but we'll see. i'm slow, =P