Comments | shayla_kage: Fic STXI: The Wolf, the Moon and the Sun

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Fic STXI: The Wolf, the Moon and the Sun

Jul 15, 2010 13:31

Title: The Wolf, the Moon and the Sun

Author: shayla_kage

Universe: Reboot

Pairing: Kirk Prime/Spock Prime

Rating: PG-13

Word count: 935

Trope: established relationship, bonding, telepathy

Disclaimer: Not Mine

A/N: I don’t know where this came from… nor how to properly label the genre and trope -_-‘…

Okay~, hmmm, I do know the first one, it started ( Read more... )

star trek, fanfic, kirk/spock, reboot

Comments 8

snakelights July 15 2010, 14:41:23 UTC

Lovely!
I like your metaphor of Kirk as a wolf and the implications there in. Also Prequel would be lovely for this- maybe wither Kirk Prime or Spock reboot's view?

shayla_kage July 16 2010, 14:30:50 UTC

Thanks, 'm glad you like it, wasn't sure how it would turn out, since it's been quite a while since I've written something.
The idea of the wolf occured to me spontanously and so I'm not sure yet whether or not I'll make a companion story to it.

ariadnechan July 15 2010, 16:58:27 UTC

i never think of Jim as a wolf, but as a sun and Spock as a moon
but i like the idea! i really like it!

maybe it could be only tos?

the last part is confusing!

shayla_kage July 16 2010, 14:35:32 UTC

I usually see him as a sun as well, but the idea just popped into my head and I thought it was sorta fitting.

I thought at first to make it only Jim centric, but then I started viewing it more clearly from Spock Prime's PoV, since my original idea was to make a reference to reboot-puppy-Jim. It just turned out different to what I wanted at first.

I guess the last part with both Jims and the mindmeld did turn out a bit weird, but when I tried to change it, it appeared to me that the flow of the story was going to be changed too much. I just hope it was too confusing. Sorry.

ariadnechan July 16 2010, 17:35:09 UTC

I love Spock pov!!!!

and i really like the wolf idea is very fitting!!!!!

it is only the last 2 paragraphs that i find confusing all other is really great you don't need to feel sorry about anything
thanks for sharing!!

ariadnechan July 16 2010, 17:36:42 UTC

this is very tos fitting that's why you don't need nuones that's what i try to tell you.

easilymused1956 July 15 2010, 20:43:27 UTC

I really liked this. Spock returning to the alpha, to the pack leader. Being accepted with open arms and open mind.

Lovely story.

Renee

shayla_kage July 16 2010, 14:36:21 UTC

Thank you so much. I was a bit intimidated of posting it, since it's my first try on this fandom.