Poem

[shawnaree]

I thought about not posting this, but I decided to anyway.

Comments

[arcticpoetry]

Shawna--

As a lover of poetry...I want to compliment you on your voice in this poem...it expresses so much...so much about the "you" you share and the "you" you internalize.

You answer questions and pose new ones...there is admission, there is fear, there is security, and insecurity...it exposes human frailties and examines personal strength...

I truely feel honored that you would share something so deeply personal and reflective with me...(and the rest of lj)...but thank you.

Your last two lines...profound, and that's all I can say...

[shawnaree]

Thank you for the comment Annika. I really appreciate your words.

[boigrrl1der]

WOW....that's all I can say... I really NEED to put your poetry in my monologue book I'm compiling.

Very nice!

[nineite]

I believe you have expressed yourself well here. This was a good read.