Rope's End, Hakkai/Sanzo, NSFW

Sep 22, 2008 20:52

Title: Rope’s End
Author: Sharpeslass
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: 83 (Hakkai/Sanzo)
Summary: Don’t you think Hakkai’s going to be a little angry with Sanzo for leaving them all to fend for themselves?
A/N This could be seen, by the extremely sensitive as non-con. It is NOT non con and if it looks like it, I’ve written it wrong, but I wanted to throw in the ( Read more... )

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clytemnaestra September 24 2008, 02:36:53 UTC
When I first read the heading to this story, I was going to skip it (not a huge 83 fan, and dub-con...) but then did a double-take: sharpeslass wrote 83??? Maybe that's a typo?? She had to mean 85, right? Hmmmm, interesting!

And I actually really ended up liking it!! I loved how you wrote Hakkai and Sanzo's bizarre dynamic, and the ending was perfect.
So many parts I loved, here are a few:
"Hakkai could settle in and play silent anger for weeks, if not months, or even decades."

"He decided his intellect was actually decreasing proportionally to the rate at which his erection was growing."

:)

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sharpeslass September 24 2008, 05:33:33 UTC
LOLZ. I didn't know I had a 58 rep... It's accurate in any case; I'm fully planning to write a 58 PWP as soon as possible lest anyone forget my OTP! Thank you so much for reading this one. I was afraid no one would! And I'm glad you didn't hate it. *hugs*

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clytemnaestra September 25 2008, 02:32:46 UTC
heh, I thought I remembered hearing that you were a huuuuuge 58 fan, or perhaps just a huuuuge Hakkai fan? Although, the fact that I am both of these things may be influencing my memory!
I definitely look forward to your 58 PWP! :) And no, I definitely didn't hate this one at all, on the contrary I really liked it!

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sharpeslass September 25 2008, 20:14:35 UTC
I am a pretty big fan of 58, but the second one is right too. I love all things Hakkai and will pretty much read any pairing as long as he's involved somehow!
Thanks again, and I'll work on that OTP PWP this weekend!

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jedishampoo September 24 2008, 04:31:21 UTC
Thank you, again, dahling, for going out on a limb and writing me the 83 crack I needed! There is so not enough. I really really like your Sanzo POV; I don't know why there is so much resistance to this pairing because the relationship between these two is simpatico and matter-of-fact in so many ways, and so different from the relationships between any of the other characters, and the way you wrote them dealing with each other is perfect-- even Hakkai comes alive so much through Sanzo's (and your) eyes.

What's most super-duper hot to me in this story is how much Hakkai is getting into it-- heh heh! And Hakkai's not even my number one! Plus, you know it was good if it made me hot and bothered again as I was doing my super-sekrit coding on it. ;)

::hugs::

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sharpeslass September 24 2008, 05:35:15 UTC
Sank Kyuuu, sweetie! I'm glad you made the request, because that seems to be the only way I write anything nowadays and it was also a really fun challenge! (and boy was it a challenge). I cannot WAIT to see the 58 you are writing me in return!! *happy58dansen!*

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sharpeslass September 24 2008, 22:52:37 UTC
i can seeeeeee you! Thanks for reading and for loving my non-conmom Hakkai

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caeseria October 4 2008, 18:07:07 UTC
HA! I just found you here!! Reading the 83!! I don't feel like the only 53 traitor at the moment now.... XDDD

Draw moar porn and I'll overlook finding this....LOL

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inksheddings September 25 2008, 01:08:41 UTC
Well done, honey! I love how Sanzo had to be literally restrained in the beginning. That totally made sense to me, as well as made me rather...happy. *g*

I have to admit, I still have a hard time with this pairing. This is a well-written story and I think the characterizations are spot on, but I can't help it! I want Gojyo to think Hakkai's his type! *laughs*

But seriously...

“You always have a safe word, Sanzo... actually, you have two of them.”

That? Was perfect.

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sharpeslass September 25 2008, 20:15:24 UTC
Thank you so much! And I'm 100% with you on Gojyo/Hakkai. You know that's my OTP as well!!

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sharpeslass September 25 2008, 20:16:08 UTC
Thanks! There seems to be rather a lot of 83 popping up lately. It will never replace 58 for me, but I do rather like reading it!

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