Indecipherable (Community fic)

[sinecure]

Title: Indecipherable (1/?)
Author: sinecure - My master fic list
Character/Pairing: Jeff/Annie
Rating: PG (for now)
Word Count: 2,454
Genre: Romance, angst
Spoilers: Season 3 to be safe.
Summary: After Shirley's wedding, Annie seeks out Jeff, who, as we all know, drowned his sorrows quite thoroughly.
Disclaimer: I don't own Community and I make no money

Comments

[crittab]

Oh man... So sad, and so sweet. Is this going to stick with canon, or stray from this point forward? Either way, I'm really looking forward to more :)

[sinecure]

It'll stick into cannon if that makes sense. But it will go AU like it already has with his confession.

Hope I don't disappoint! :)

[teruel_a_witch]

Yay, you unleashed the suffering on the world, now I'm not the only one suffering :P

I think I said everything back in May, you know how it speaks to me, and how personal the Bert-and-Ernie detail is for me,heh. And I enjoy reading it all for the umpteenth time. (you know this was probably what jump-started my recent Jeff-is-pining-for-Annie obsession,heh, and then my obsession with a ship on Rookie Blue(that had a lot of pining on the guy's side) helped, and just analysing the second part of s3)

He wanted to know them, to know her, to find out everything about Annie Edison and what made her tick because she baffled him and made him angry, turned him on and made him to want to scream. She was a mystery he'd put the effort into solving.
This...just...this is love.

She was warm and soft and she smelled like home.
♥ Favourite line.

Your A/N, hehe, you continue to be adorable.

So, I hope since now it's not just I who suffer waiting for the update you'll have more mercy ;)

[sinecure]

I did! I really, really did. It was supposed to spur me on, get me hardcore into writing the next chapter.

Uh, I'm still waiting for that to happen. A few lines here and there don't constitute spurring. :(

Hehe, the Bert and Ernie thing.

Wait, wait, wait, wait, wait. How can I have started you down the path to Jeff-pining-for-Annie fics if your prompt started this fic? Chicken? Egg? One of them came first. Yep, I think it was all you and your other show and season 3. You started my love for it!

Wow, I am so glad you like that paragraph because I almost took it out about 50 billion times. I wasn't sure Jeff would ever think he wanted to know what made someone tick. Light sweat, remember. Minimal effort.

Aww. He likes him some chocolate chip cookies and Annie-in-bed. Or just Annie. Whatevs.

*snicker* I continue to be annoyed by Dan and the writers for getting their stuff out first.

I hoped! I posted it for that very reason!

... I'm still waiting for the muse to kick in. :(

[teruel_a_witch]

*sends vicious plot bunnies your way*

Ehem, excuse me, there was nothing about pining in the prompt, it's relatively harmless, just a but of introspection here and there, I had no idea what was gonna happen in that fic when you sent it to me, you totally sneaked in DEH angst on me (I'm not complaining, I loved it, you gave me something I didn't know I wanted) but don't go blaming it on me :P
You started my love for it!
Hey.hey, you were the one who convinced me Jeff was in love with Annie in the first place, so who's the enabler here, huh? ;) I was like "well, I'm not sure how he feels I can't put a label on it" and you were like "no, he's batshit crazy in love with her, I don't need the show to spell it out". So there, you started it, don't go blaming it on me *blows a raspberry*

Minimal effort.
Not when it comes to Annie, especially these days ;) And I'm pretty sure when you love somebody/something you want to know every little detail about them, what makes them tick, what makes them them. So that paragraph actually proves that

[sinecure]

Okay, so I added the angst and pining on my own. I'll own it, and the part where I convinced you that Jeff is in love with her. Totally my doing. *g*

I love when people find deeper meaning to my fics than I actually put in, because it makes me wonder if, on some level, I actually added it in. Makes me feel all deep and smart 'n stuff. ;)

Mmmm, Annie in my bed. I wouldn't kick her out! Not many would, I'd agree.

I'm really not bothered by them not having sex. I really fear that it'll just go to shit the moment the relationship is actually somewhat defined. Even in as little a way as sleeping together. I have fanfic for that. I'd love to see it, but only if it goes well and stays good. There can be bumps and crap along the way, otherwise it'd be boring, but I need it to end well.

Hee. I think I've decided on no Annie-POV at all. I took out the bit I had in there. I agree, I think seeing her feelings through Jeff's eyes is a better way to go.

[nyclove3]

[sinecure]

Why, thank you for the vote of confidence! I hope it is, but I'm still writing. Still pounding ideas out of my head with a rubber mallet.

Aww, she didn't mean to! She felt very bad, even he could tell that. Still, doesn't make it better, does it? Yes, I was just pointing out the Jeff-denial in another comment above. I agree completely, 100%.

Oh, I can't wait to see what I have planned either! LOL.

Thank you! I hope I don't disappoint. :)

[iknowitsbutters]

I was a little puzzled and disappointed that it ended like that - then I noticed this is just the first chapter and isn't a one shot, so it's all good. Now I can wait impatiently with all the others for Jeff to get sober and prove himself for real. And since almost no other author is this vivid on how crazy Jeff is about Annie and everything there is about her, it's bound to be even sweeter redemption - hopefully.

[sinecure]

It actually wasn't supposed to end like that at all, and then it just did. I'm not sure where the angst came from, but it smacked me in the face, I can tell you.

Yep, there'll be more, but I'm thinking only one more chapter. It was supposed to be a oneshot, so I'd like to keep it relatively short.

Blame it all on teruel_a_witch, I do. ;)

Redemption coming soonish. Or possible redemption anyway.

[wallows]

ooh properly slayed! I love seeing Jeff's vulnerable side, and how despite his best efforts, he could not quell the rising Annie feelings. Annie is wonderful, being aupportive, yet needing to hold back a little.And I laughed that Jeff's dog is BurtandErnie, one word.

[sinecure]

I'm so afraid of Jeff's vulnerable side. I'm afraid I'll go too far with it.

Hee. Is it tacky and wrong of me to love the dog bit too? *is a dork*