Fallout (Community fic)

[sinecure]

Title: Fallout (3/3)
Author: sinecure - My master fic list
Character/Pairing: Jeff/Annie
Rating: Adult (R)
Genre: Romance, smut, slight angst
Spoilers: 3x10 (X-mas episode)
Word Count: 8,673
Summary: Annie confronts Jeff and smut ensues.
Disclaimer: I don't own Community and I make no money off of it.
A/N: Well, here it is, for better or worse, chapter 3.

Comments

[crittab]

I'm torn between being all "unf" about the sex and all "aww" about everything else.

I'll just combine them for effect-- it's an unfaw... a rare species that emerges with just the right combination of sexy and sweet.

It's 5am. I can't be held accountable for my reactions to hot fics.

[sinecure]

Hehe, that's about a perfect response. Unfaw. Works for me!

As other people referenced your response in their comments, I'm gonna say you did damn well for 5am.

Glad you liked it, and thank you for commenting. I'm thrilled to be done with it, but sad to see it go. :/

[leigh198910]

I wholeheartedly second the above comment. Very nice work, this was sexy, adorable, and so well written. Excellent work!

[sinecure]

Thank you so much! Unfaw to you. ;)

Love your icon, btw.

[krystal214]

I loved the way you ended it with the texting conversation redone. What a nice touch to finish this amazing story. You had me blushing and laughing throughout. Amazing. The first comment to the story says it all. This was in its own category of awesome. =)

[sinecure]

Thanks! I'm a big fan of symmetry and whenever possible, I try to slip a little into my fics.

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[nyclove3]

[sinecure]

Hehe, thanks! Man, I try hard to make my sex scenes feel natural, but I don't always know if I succeed or not. Talking during sex is a thing with me. Otherwise it's just sex and reading it can get boring. I like reading dialogue in fics, so stopping that during sex just feels wrong and unnatural to me.

Oy, the dirty talk is something I struggle with each and every time I attempt it.

The thing about Jeff not being able to say he loves Annie was something I really worried about. I often forget little and big things from the show, and I couldn't quite decide if he'd be able to say it or not. I liked the way it turned out, but I thought it might ring false. I'm so happy it rang true!

Symmetry and I are like this... You can't see it, but I'm holding up crossed fingers. ;)

Thank you so much! For both reviews.

[rufeepeach]

Ngh... Guuuuuuuuh

I saw this posted, and decided I'd leave a lovely long comment to make up for forgetting on the last chapter... but damn! You broke my brain. Then I fixed it with crazy-glue, only to have the sweet, honest awesomeness of the last bit melt it again.

You so need to write a sequel, with the actual Santa outfit.

[sinecure]

Aww, I don't mean to break. Although, I think in this instance, I'm glad I did? ;)

I've been told I need to write a sequel/sequels and I'm considering it. Specifically with the outfit. And dealing with the consequences of everything. That last part scares me though, so I may need a little time to figure stuff out. And other fics are happening and-- yup. Time.

Thanks for commenting, even with a broken brain! Which, you're pretty coherent what with being all broke.