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shadowofmyday

My (Fallen) Angel Chapter one/ prologue

Jul 08, 2011 12:58

My (Fallen) Angel
Summary: Siwon calls for an angel, he gets Lucifer himself.
Warnings: Religious doubts and that sort of stuff. Yaoi. If you don't like it, don't read. ^^
Pairing: SiChul
Rating: PG-13

( The fall was always easy, it was the landing that brought pain... )

!fanfiction, pg-13, sichul, my (fallen) angel, super junior

Comments 14

youngsoongi July 8 2011, 05:02:45 UTC

how ironic... Siwon's solo from SuperShow2 started to play right now xD
LOL
and when I start to type the comment, Heechul's solo starts to play. how nice xD

anyway...

the stalker part I found a bit funny. how can one come up with ideas like this, if he's not the popular kid? who would stalk him? xD

“I would not be able to carry on with my normal life. I'd never see you again, I'd have to stop fantasising about you doing something so bad that it would land you permanently in my clutches, I'd have to stop fantasising about you being mine...” Heechul insisted, a far-away look in his eyes that only made Siwon even more uncomfortable. I do hope HeeChul will make Siwon do something THAT bad. *_*

i liked this - can't wait for the development of the story line in next chapters :)

shadowofmyday July 8 2011, 05:27:37 UTC

...The bullies could stalk him? xD He's a special paranoid child. XP

...really? I was kind of hoping Siwon would do it of his own will... ;)

Thank you! I'll try to updaye soon~ Because oh my gosh, for once, I actually have more written. Shock. Horror.

youngsoongi July 8 2011, 05:40:47 UTC

those would be some pretty awkward bullies then xD

well, you're the boss in this situation, so you'll decide either HeeChul makes him to do it or Siwon does it by his own free will

good to hear that ^_^

shadowofmyday July 8 2011, 06:00:54 UTC

It's strange to hear that, because I feel half the time that I don't even get a say in these stories, like they've written themselves and I'm just typing them. I don't know. I'm weird I guess. XD

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mery_chan_89 July 8 2011, 12:26:55 UTC

OMO!!!!!*__________________*
Is interesting!!!! I want the nex chapter!!! *___*

shadowofmyday July 8 2011, 14:54:11 UTC

Haha, thanks for the comment. I'll try to update soon~

mery_chan_89 July 8 2011, 15:51:21 UTC

Perfect!!!*____*

blueplue_hotaru July 12 2011, 18:47:32 UTC

lol heechul will be just as heechul XD

shadowofmyday July 13 2011, 00:14:54 UTC

Yeah, I'm hoping so. It's a little difficult to write but I'm trying. ^^

Thanks for the comment~