MY SWEET PRINCE (NC-17) BY IAMSHADOW

[shadowfiction]

Title: My Sweet Prince
Author: iamshadow
Ship: Charlie/Percy
Word Count: 3,061
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Anonymous/casual sex. Weasleycest.
Summary: Disguises, desires, and the crossing of uncrossable lines.
A/N: Written for weasley_fest '08.

Comments

[littlemissgg]

Ooooo! This is fab! Really hot and a really good twist.

[shadowfiction]

Yay! Someone liked it!

*squishes you tight*

This fic was the major fail of the fest, and not just out of my fics, either. Least comments of anything, minus my dummy comment! I think the pairing was too odd for some people, and a lot of folks don't like incest fic.

[littlemissgg]

Oh no way - I would say not a fail just not enough people appreciating the genius!
I'm a totally weasley-cest girl and anything with Charlie is always a plus. I wouldn't put too much faith in comments, apart from mine, obviously! :P

[shadowfiction]

LOL! Oh, you. :D

I think the other thing that doomed it a little was that the original recipient dropped out, so it ended up a 'fest gift'. So, no recipient comment, or subsequent reccing on said recipient's journal.

[hpuckle]

"We have to go," he heard himself whine when they broke for air, "or I'm going to lose control and fuck you right here." Oliver trembled in his arms, his eyes large with lust, disbelief and a hint of fear.
Guh. Seriously, Charlie is just hot nomatter what he looks like. And I'm not a big fan of blondes! ;)

Percy looked up into the face above him, and knew that they had passed the point of no return long ago. "Yes. Move."
Oh, Percy, you're filthy and I love it.

Very hot, and I love the little twist.

xxx

[shadowfiction]

Hehe! I just had to change both of their appearances, and I didn't want them both brunettes. The picture I had in my mind was that Charlie ended up looking kind of Slavic, with blonde hair, bright blue eyes and tanned skin. He's got a general glamour on, and something to modify his voice a little, too. Percy turned his hair brown and grew it shoulder length, put on a glamour and grew stubble, too. He also did a temporary Optical Enhancement Charm, so that he could ditch his glasses. They're not the kind of thing you can do all the time, because they irritate the eyes and can lead to deteriorating sight if used long term, but for one evening, it's not going to do him much harm.

I love my Charlie in this. He just oozes confidence and sex, and I think Percy's utterly baffled that someone like that would want him. He doesn't understand that for Charlie, someone like Percy is the best kind of fun. He loves seeing the shyness peeling away, the tentative touches becoming more confident. He knows he's a good fuck, and he loves giving someone

[tree00faery]

Eh...? This was really good, but kind of confusing. I read it straight to the end and then was like "Wait. What?" and re-read it. I think it makes sense now. Maybe. I just got back from a convention, and I haven't had more than 12 hours of sleep in the last 3 days, so sorry if I make no sense. I'm sorta out of it. Anyways, the fic was very hot. Nice job! ^_^ You sure had a bunch of stuff in Weasleyfest.

[shadowfiction]

Aww! *tucks you into bed*

Because the story kind of acts on the assumption that the reader will work out that both parties are disguising their identities, I can see how it could be confusing. There were a number of subtle clues, but if you're overtired, you could easily have missed them.

Yes, I wrote three pinch hits. Only two ended up going to specific recipients; this one ended up being a 'spare'.

[unomesowell]

Honestly I don't like incest fics and rarely read them unless its you. The twist you put on this gave me just enough permission to enjoy it fully! LOL Really well written, very clever, and engaging.

[shadowfiction]

You don't have to read it, even if it's me! I totally understand that a lot of people don't like it

[unomesowell]

Thats what drew me to continue reading. We have these preconcieved notions about people we "know" that block our visions of them and prevent us from really seeing them. You really drew that out with this plot.

[shadowfiction]

I'm glad that came through!

Yeah, probably the best example is Charlie. On the scene, he loves those reserved, shy, slightly stiff Ministry types, but when he's thinking about Percy the next morning, all he thinks is what a prude he is (despite the fact that he typifies of what he looks for, sexually).

[shadowfiction]

This is a one off, so, no more. You'll have to imagine the rest for yourself. I really liked the uneven balance of knowing vs not, and Percy going through that moral dilmma and deciding to continue.