Comments | shadowbaby4: new poem, first draft

shadowbaby4

new poem, first draft

Mar 22, 2010 23:24

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Comments 7

greenmeridian March 23 2010, 18:14:28 UTC

this has potential, babe! i'm not likin the last part so much...and smaybe a look in their shed out of idle curiousity instead of from a book? not meaning to jump on your words, here, tho...it's really nice. i love words.

shadowbaby4 March 24 2010, 02:22:22 UTC

Oh, I like where you're going with the peek in the neighbor's shed. I appreciate all constructive criticism, so thank you.

miss_colombina August 19 2010, 02:45:13 UTC

when I'm on my death bed, I'll say, damnit, I wish I mowed my lawn more often!! that's the one thing I regret.

shadowbaby4 August 19 2010, 13:03:15 UTC

LOL

saltmarshdreams January 4 2011, 22:28:40 UTC

I LOVE the way you write! *awed* I read one comment by you on _______feathers and I could tell from those two lines that you could write well, so I came to look at your journal ( - if that doesn't sound stalker-ish...). I'm so glad I did!
May I add you? Please?
:):)

shadowbaby4 January 5 2011, 14:05:23 UTC

You certainly may add me! I love friends!

saltmarshdreams January 5 2011, 19:00:53 UTC

Thank you! I added you! :)