H/C drabble - "Control"

[sgr11]

H/C Drabble - "Control"
A little smutty... ;) A little spur of the moment piece...
Possibly to be continued...

Comments

[lea724]

Oh, wow, I really like that! I love the descriptions of how she has the control and how she orchestrates everything.

One error that I found: His lips are so softer than he mouth

Should be: His lips are so much softer than his mouth.

[sgr11]

Thanks lea724! *hugs* It was very late when I wrote it! I made the changes! :)

[ww_sb_xf]

*spechless*

well... that uhmm is nice (as in extremely hot!!!!)

I want more! XD i call it research ;P

[sgr11]

I'm glad you like!

You want more?!?

Yes, I've already gotten the suggestion of writing it from House's POV too! We'll see... it was a spur of the moment piece... I'll have to think about it!

(XD?? I don't know what that means! sorry...I'm bad with that kind of stuff...) Research huh?

[ww_sb_xf]

Long time ago i found the perfect excuse to read "adult" stories (X-Files time of my life, 1999)

Is research :) The sex education that school refused to give.

[phineyj]

*fans self* Yup, works for me. It's not rough at all! How about re-doing it from his POV?

[sgr11]

*giggles* Glad you like!
I'll post then to house_cameron. Hmmm...that's a thought, doing it from his POV, I'll think about it... Thanks!

[starhawk2005]

his hand clasping one of yours, holding it tight against his chest.

*thud* Something about that line got to me. Tenderness, in the midst of the passion. Me likey.

Fantastic. And it's true. He might THINK he's in control, but by joining with her, it's more of a team effort. ;)

[sgr11]

*thud* Something about that line got to me. Tenderness, in the midst of the passion. Me likey.

*giggle* Glad you likey... You know she has him then... that grasp, that hold in the middle of rough thrusts... ;)

Fantastic. And it's true. He might THINK he's in control, but by joining with her, it's more of a team effort. ;)
Very true... very true...
Hmm..phineyj thought I should write a part from his POV... but this could turn into a short three parter maybe... then a last part perhaps from combined POV's...I'll have to think about it... It was a spur of the moment (uhem) piece last night... I'll have to put more thought into it...

[starhawk2005]

You know she has him then... that grasp, that hold in the middle of rough thrusts... ;)

*thuds a couple more times, for good measure*

Hmm..[info]phineyj thought I should write a part from his POV... but this could turn into a short three parter maybe... then a last part perhaps from combined POV's...I'll have to think about it... It was a spur of the moment (uhem) piece last night... I'll have to put more thought into it...

If you want to, could be cool. My philosophy is to usually let the Muses think on it, and if something grabs me, I'll write it. Otherwise, it's not worth 'forcing' it.

[sgr11]

*thuds a couple more times, for good measure*
oh goody! ;) that was one of my favorite parts too...it's visual and you can feel it...

If you want to, could be cool.
I'll have to think about it... maybe...

My philosophy is to usually let the Muses think on it, and if something grabs me, I'll write it. Otherwise, it's not worth 'forcing' it.
ITA... and this is what happened here... I'm starting to realize if I think too much about it, it doesn't always work. I wish I had a laptop and I could go sit on my porch. It's so lovely out... *sighs* I am thinking about returning to 'cooking' though... and I should have another chapter of 'tragic' out soon...hopefully this weekend...I finished it last week, but msyutamiyu has been very busy with exams! so soon!
*hugs*
S.
Hope you had a good day...and that you're headache wasn't too bad. :)

[sarah]

I can see it now. :) And it's good. I like. :)

[sgr11]

Glad you liked! And that you could finally see it! ;) Thanks for commenting! :)