Fic: Warrior (4/4)

Jun 03, 2011 00:00

Story info and warnings can be found in part 1.

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!fic, author:shippen_stand, 2011

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skeddy_kat June 6 2011, 02:42:26 UTC
This was an interesting concept and you executed it beautifully. I loved the look inside John and the contrast between who he thought everyone needed to be and the fact that what they really needed was for him to be himself.

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popkin16 June 7 2011, 04:18:42 UTC
Oh, I love this. It hurt my heart, reading John thinking about how he needed to change. I kept hoping someone would do something, and when they finally did, the relief was overwhelming. Poor Rodney, too. I'm so glad he got a happy ending in the end, that John wanted Rodney enough to keep pushing, to make Rodney believe.

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rawa_02 June 16 2011, 06:15:05 UTC
"They had long been dancing, and they would always dance." Sigh...

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pionie July 9 2011, 21:56:22 UTC
I really enjoyed this - the team building, first with Ford and then with Shane. Then the way that Shane was the one that came up with the plan to save John, even though John hadn't really given him much in return - people appreciated John just the way he was, without him needing to change.

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