DARK NIGHT [PG]

[x_erikah_x]

Title: Dark Night
Author: x-erikah-x
Prompt: at the end
Written for: roo1965
Rating: PG
Character: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Teyla Emmagan, Ronon Dex, Carson Beckett
Word count: ~8,200
Disclamer: Stargate belongs to MGM and maybe some other people as well, but I'm not one of them.
Summary: A mission offworld goes bad when John's team mysteriously disappears. Now

Comments

[tridget]

Ooooh. That was one heck of a nasty virus and the cause of a jumper whump crash to boot. Double the fun. And awwww, John was still thinking of his team even when hallucinating. So true. Knowing his team was still there for him at the end was a nice warm ending.

[x_erikah_x]

Thanks. ^.^ John luffs his team.

[kriadydragon]

Most excellent:D Poor John and McKay, their ATA genes seem more a curse than a blessing. Bet Rodney regrets getting the gene therapy ;)

[x_erikah_x]

lol. Bet he does.

[michelel72]

Very tense, and great job holding back the true situation. I didn't see the twist coming at all.

[x_erikah_x]

Thanks. I was afraid it would come as a bit confusing. I'm glad it worked.

[coolbreeze1]

Wow! I was totally drawn in by the creatures, as convinced they were real as John and Rodney. Then adding in a jumper crash! I love jumper crashes! :D

This was a great story! Well done!

[x_erikah_x]

Thanks. The jumper crash was the first thing I wrote, even before I had a story and a plot. Love'em too.

[kristen999]

This was really enjoyable. All the jungle imagery with the mud and smacking leaves really put me there and John's hallucinations were really well done. I'm a sucker for a feral Sheppard struggling when one of his teammates tries to subdue him. The added medical details gave this a nice edge of realism as did seeing things with a variety of POV’s.

This was fun!

[x_erikah_x]

Thanks. It's really nice to see what other writers have to say. It was a bit tricky coming up with the details, but I got really excited when I finally started going.