DARK NIGHT [PG]

[x_erikah_x]

Title: Dark Night
Author: x-erikah-x
Prompt: at the end
Written for: roo1965
Rating: PG
Character: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Teyla Emmagan, Ronon Dex, Carson Beckett
Word count: ~8,200
Disclamer: Stargate belongs to MGM and maybe some other people as well, but I'm not one of them.
Summary: A mission offworld goes bad when John's team mysteriously disappears. Now

Comments

[wildcat88]

Nicely done. The imagery gives a good sense of place and makes John's confusion and panic very real.

[x_erikah_x]

Thanks!

[saphirablue]

Oh, great fic! :) I like it! :) And hallucinating!John never gets old. I love it!

I like that you started the fic offworld and that it took Ronon/Teyla a while to find John (and Rodney) and get them help and that even when they were back in Atlantis that it took some time until they got well again. :)

I love the little nod to sentient!Atlantis ahem, sentient!Jumper. At least, I like to interpret it that way. :)

Thank you for this fic! :)

[x_erikah_x]

Thanks. I love fics that start offworld.

The Ancient technology just love him, don't they?

[roo1965]

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to squeee and generally jump up and down about a fic written for me! I was totally taken in with the red-eyed growly creatures terrorising Sheppard. You packed in a lot- the dodgy LSD readings, the river, Ronon jumping in to save Rodney and whumping the heck out of John in the jumper crash and flailing about in the woods, the hallucinations etc! Thank you for an exciting read.

[x_erikah_x]

Weee! Thanks!!! It's always a lot of fun whumping the heck out of him.