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BATTLING FIRST BY kristen999 [LFWS #1 ROUND 7]

Jan 26, 2009 09:22

Title:Battling First
Author: kristen999
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Stargate belongs to Metro-Goldwyn-Mayer Studios Inc., no infringements of any rights is intended.
Spoilers: Post "Enemy at the Gate"
Prompt for the Round: Write a whump fic using Ronon with the team (any or all). Ronon POV. No other characters.

( Battling First )

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Comments 8

wildcat88 January 26 2009, 15:35:36 UTC

Ronon ripping a seat out of a Porsche because it's too small is a great image.

kristen999 February 3 2009, 20:03:57 UTC

heeh thank you!!

writerjc January 27 2009, 03:44:39 UTC

Loved it! I could totally see Shep teaching Ronon to drive a high-powered sports car. . .

kristen999 February 3 2009, 20:04:23 UTC

Don't tempt me to expand it!!! Thank you!

tzzzz January 27 2009, 08:19:21 UTC

I like this little scene. For some reason it took me a little while to realize that they were without the rest of the team, but I really like the idea of Ronon struggling to drive stick to get John to a hospital, and I can totally see Ronon goading John into falling out of a tree.

kristen999 February 3 2009, 20:05:29 UTC

Thank you! This was fun to do and makes me want to re-write it as a longer little fic becasue 400 words? not a lot to work with :D

linzi5 January 30 2009, 19:52:43 UTC

Wonderful! As always. Well done :)

kristen999 February 3 2009, 20:05:43 UTC

Thank you hon!!