GIRL TALK BY pansychubb [LFWS #1 ROUND 6]

Jan 12, 2009 09:24

Title: Girl Talk
Author: pansychubb
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Stargate belongs to Metro-Goldwyn-Mayer Studios Inc., no infringements of any rights is intended.
Spoilers: minor one for episode 5x14 "The Prodigal"
Author's Note: Thank you to my dad for the idea, Alana for the beta, and my mom for the encouragement.
Prompt for the Round: Write a whump fic using ( Read more... )

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rustydog January 12 2009, 20:15:01 UTC
Hee! Unique format, entertaining way to frame a conversation, well done.

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pansychubb January 19 2009, 01:57:43 UTC
Thank you very much! I was worried the action might get in the way of the conversation, so I'm glad it accentuated it instead.

Thanks again!

:-)
-Pansy Chubb (aka LilRicki)

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pansychubb January 19 2009, 01:59:05 UTC
Thank you! In such short fics, I always feel the last line needs to be a kicker, so I'm glad it worked for you!

Thanks again!

:-)
-Pansy Chubb (aka LilRicki)

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wildcat88 January 13 2009, 17:33:33 UTC
I enjoyed this. Love using conversation to distract, sometimes with unexpected results.

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pansychubb January 19 2009, 02:00:45 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it - and I'll let my dad know, since he actually gave me the idea. :-D

Thanks again for the feedback!

:-)
-Pansy Chubb (aka LilRicki)

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2bluaeryn January 14 2009, 13:08:36 UTC
Very cute!

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pansychubb January 19 2009, 02:01:06 UTC
Thanks very much!

:-)
-Pansy Chubb (aka LilRicki)

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trystings January 16 2009, 20:04:01 UTC
I love this. Two kick-ass women, a funny conversation and a great punch line.

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pansychubb January 19 2009, 02:04:10 UTC
Thank you! I've been on an angst kick for so long now that my humor wheels were rusty, so I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks again!

:-)
-Pansy Chubb (aka LilRicki)

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