WHEN REALITY HITS BY kristen999 [LFWS #1 ROUND 5]

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Title: When Reality Hits
Author: kristen999
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Stargate belongs to Metro-Goldwyn-Mayer Studios Inc., no infringements of any rights is intended.
Spoilers: None
Prompt for the Round: Write any fic using Rodney with either Ronon OR Teyla. Rodney POV.

Comments

[annieb1955]

An interesting look into Rodney's mind and feelings. The Teyla voice in this is well done too. There's a typo in the first sentence though. It should read breathe, not breath. It's a pretty common error though.

[kristen999]

*headdesk* on the type-o..have no ide I missed that. Must have been the late hour. Glad you enjoyed it.

[writerjc]

Excellent writing. This just grips you right in the gut and drags you along. I think I'm jealous :)

[kristen999]

Aww..thank you. I'm glad it grabbed you like that.

[margarks]

I liked this a lot. One of the few Teyla & Rodney fics, and the glimpse into Rodney's head and his feelings about death and killing another human being were interesting and in character. Nice job.

[kristen999]

Thank you so much. I wanted a little bit of Teyla and Rodney.