FEET ON THE GROUND BY jadesfire2808 [LFWS #1 ROUND 4]

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Title: Feet on the Ground
Author: jadesfire2808
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Stargate belongs to Metro-Goldwyn-Mayer Studios Inc., no infringements of any rights is intended.
Spoilers: None
Prompt for the Round: Write a whump fic with John and ONE of his team. John POV.

Comments

[iamza]

Heh, space vampires being just one of the many unanticipated joys of space adventures for John Sheppard, I bet.

I liked the banter between Ronon and John, and the hint at the end of John's competitive frustration. He just can't win against Ronon. :-)

[drufan]

Really liked the pause in the escape to long for the stars. Gives us a little insight into both characters. Plus, there's humor. Nicely told.

[wildcat88]

I liked this. Nice interaction between John and Ronon. Good reveal of what happened. Loved the last line.

[kristen999]

Very sweet, love the easy friendship between Ronon and John here. And Ronon getting injured because of a fall while shoving John out of the way.

[rustydog]

Nice. Genuine, real-feeling moments between John and Ronon and some Rodney humor thrown in. Ease of description and setting.