CRASH BY obsessed101 [LFWS #1 ROUND 4]

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Title: Crash
Author: obsessed101
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Stargate belongs to Metro-Goldwyn-Mayer Studios Inc., no infringements of any rights is intended.
Spoilers: None
Prompt for the Round: Write a whump fic with John and ONE of his team. John POV.

Comments

[iamza]

Hahaha, that there's even talk of a drill for when Sheppard's injured off world says so much.

Loved the banter between Sheppard and Ronon. They work so well together.

[obsessed1o1]

Thank you. I really struggled with this prompt so really glad you enjoyed it. And for Ronon and Shep, i think they would definately have a drill. :D

[drufan]

This hits my whump happy place. Sheppard and Ronon plus gunshot wound = squee. Plus gives a lot of information in a short amount of space.

[obsessed1o1]

Thank you.

Crash

[anonymous]

Very well done.

Re: Crash

[obsessed1o1]

Thank you for reviewing

[2bluaeryn]

His side is on fire as his stomach cuts into Ronon’s shoulder. “Just……. let me walk through the gate. No matter ……..what.”

Ronon starts running. “I know the drill, Sheppard.”

My boys, my boys *G*

Well done.

[obsessed1o1]

Ha! Thanks

[kristen999]

Just love that last line. Cool concept of getting the bad guys, a very Sheppard-like move to crash the jumper.

[obsessed1o1]

Thanks Kristen. Suprised i got such negative reviews but there you go.....Well done on your placing :D