VOTE OF CONFIDENCE BY linziday [LFWS #1 ROUND 3]

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Title: Vote of Confidence
Author: linziday
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Stargate belongs to Metro-Goldwyn-Mayer Studios Inc., no infringements of any rights is intended.
Spoilers: Set in Season 5, before Inquisition
A/N: Beta-ed by kriadydragon
Prompt for the Round: Choose from two to all characters from the list and write a story in which there is no dialogue at all. There

Comments

[wildcat88]

This is nice. I like the situation you've crafted, and Richard's inner thoughts on who he is and what he can and can't do. The little moment when Teyla smiles is well done.

[asugar]

I like the silent communication between them and his self-castigation.

[sholio]

This is fantastic; I really loved it. Great Woolsey voice, just the right balance of panicky and competent and sweet. And it was very well developed as a complete story for its length; it didn't feel too short.

[2bluaeryn]

A smile like the one she had given him shortly after he arrived on Atlantis, the one that said You’re doing fine.

Her confidence meant something then. It means even more now.

Speaks well of Teyla and Richard's relationship.

[rustydog]

Excellent! Good setup of the action, great window into Woolsey's head - I do see him as having self-esteem issues, of a sort, when he's out of his element - and lovely interaction with Teyla. Favorite line - the most unimaginable thing happens - she seems to understand him.