WITHOUT WORDS BY obsessed101 [LFWS #1 ROUND 3]

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Title: Without Words
Author: obsessed101
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Stargate belongs to Metro-Goldwyn-Mayer Studios Inc., no infringements of any rights is intended.
Spoilers: None
Prompt for the Round: Choose from two to all characters from the list and write a story in which there is no dialogue at all. There must be social interaction, but you can’t write any

Comments

[drufan]

Well paced and a pair that isn't usually toghether. Great answer to the prompt.

[obsessed1o1]

Thank you. You never really see them together so thought it would be an interesting partnership

[asugar]

So glad she saves him right back in the end. I love his POV.

[obsessed1o1]

Thanks - i was a little worried it might not sound like him

[sholio]

Very creative way of keeping them from talking without being obvious about it! :D I like it.

[obsessed1o1]

Thanks. Yeah i wanted a situation where they couldn't speak opposed to them just not speaking. Glad it worked

[2bluaeryn]

Teyla’s supposed to die at a ripe old age and he’s supposed to go down in a blaze of glory.

Love this line.

Well done.

[obsessed1o1]

Thanks for commenting. :D

[jessnick05]

This was great -- very vivid and intense for such a short piece. I was on edge the entire time. A great Lorne POV too, I believe this is how he'd act and react in this situation. And I loved the symmetry of Lorne giving her his breath and her returning it to him. It was lovely all around. :)

[obsessed1o1]

That was the image i had in my head all along - life begetting life :D Glad you liked it