WAITING BY schweinsty [LFWS #1 ROUND 2]

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Title: Waiting
Author: schweinsty
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Stargate belongs to Metro-Goldwyn-Mayer Studios Inc., no infringements of any rights is intended.
Spoilers: None
Prompt for the Round: It MUST be told using an original character point of view (the marine guarding the gateroom, the guy who has to clean the blood from the floor of the jumper, the med

Comments

[wildcat88]

I don't read many stories that have Sheppard and McKay worrying over Teyla and Ronon so this was a refreshing change for me. Nicely done.

[2bluaeryn]

Nice to see the infirmary from the other POV.

[margarks]

haha! I liked Rodney poking Ronon to see if he was faking :)

[rustydog]

There are a lot of stories with team members waiting in the infirmary, but this one is nicely intimate and I like the details a lot. Interesting wordless exchange at the beginning, too.

[dimity_blue]

Awww, this was sweet. I loved Rodney poking Ronon with a stylus - it's so him! John and Rodney's concern for Teyla and Ronon really came through though. Nice story.