MORE THAN JUST THE MESS HALL BY donutsweeper [LFWS #1 ROUND 2]

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Title: More Than Just The Mess Hall
Author: donutsweeper
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Stargate belongs to Metro-Goldwyn-Mayer Studios Inc., no infringements of any rights is intended.
Spoilers: None
Author's Note: Beta-ed by mad_jaks
Prompt for the Round: It MUST be told using an original character point of view (the marine guarding the gateroom, the guy who has to clean the

Comments

[linzi5]

I heard Rodney's voice so clearly here! Great job and a good response to the prompt! :)

[donutsweeper]

thank you so much!

[wildcat88]

I love the idea of the guy in charge of the mess bringing coffee/tea to the team. Great characterization for McKay and Teyla too.

[donutsweeper]

Thanks, glad you liked it!

[jessnick05]

I enjoyed this a lot. I like how it's kind of a quiet & gentle little fic. And it's a great OC, I liked him alot. A couple wonderful Teyla moments too.

[donutsweeper]

thanks! glad you liked it :)

[2bluaeryn]

Nice to see the sense of family and care coming from a different POV.

[donutsweeper]

thank you!

[margarks]

Aww, very likable POV character. Enjoyed seeing the team through his eyes.

[donutsweeper]

thanks so much!