Fic: Woven Together, Seamless (Gen, PG)

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Title: Woven Together, Seamless
Author: friendshipper
Pairing: gen, team
Rating: PG
Word Count: 8300
Recipient: trekkim
Spoilers: late season 4, but before "Kindred"
Summary: Ice worlds, drunken team snuggling, Athosian festivals and things of that nature. Gen, but maybe a teeny bit OT4-ish.
Author's Note: trekkim wanted friendship and team; I hope this suits! Thank you to sgatazmy

Comments

[skinscript]

Gorgeous descriptions, with each sense engaged. When John topped the edge of the valley, it was like I was there, made dizzy by the scale and beauty. Great job! Also, I really do love team stories that don't go crazy but instead show them as a true family with their flaws and their virtues, all open to each other.

[sholio]

Thank you! I'm especially happy that the description of the valley came through -- I wanted to convey the sense of dizzying scale, and I'm glad it worked. :)

[dossier]

just--lovely. The tempo of the visit and the sense of peace and happiness are intertwined, and it's nice to see something go right in the middle of the awfulness.

[sholio]

Thank you very much; I wanted to convey a sense of peace in the middle of disaster, and I'm so glad it came through.

[bluflamingo]

Oh, that was lovely. Sweet, but not too sweet, and the banter between Rodney and Ronon was great, as was John being uncomfortable but still doing the right thing to make Teyla feel better.

[sholio]

Thank you; I'm glad you liked it. :)

[eccentricweft]

This was very heart-warming!

[sholio]

Just what I was going for! Thanks. :)

[bironic]

This is wonderful. Sweet and funny, and heartwarming with the knitting metaphor and fake-affronted sleepy bonding.

[sholio]

Thank you! I was a bit worried about the knitting metaphor being too strained or silly, so I'm glad it worked. (And I love sleepy!team.)