Supporting Character, Week 1: Home is where the heart is

May 03, 2009 10:54

Title: Home is where the heart is
Author: Cybersyd
Genre: Supporting Character
Prompt Forbidden planet
Word Count: 5094
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Summary: Several characters return to Earth for shore leave, and find themselves rethinking their ideas of home.

Home is where the heart is )

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wildcat88 May 5 2009, 15:20:17 UTC
I liked this - the quiet feel as each person explores their feelings about home. Nicely done.

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explodedpen May 5 2009, 15:42:45 UTC
This was lovely, beautiful and truly heartbreaking. I loved your characterisation of all of them and the glimpses of Team Sheppard at the end.

Brilliant work :)

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jessnick05 May 16 2009, 16:13:21 UTC
This was so heartbreaking but so lovely. Great characterisations all around, and in particular I really loved your Miko. And great insight into the disconnect they must all feel, how strange Earth has become when they go back, how their ideas of "normal" have changed. A wonderful read.

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trishkafibble May 18 2009, 04:58:04 UTC
Lovely. Melancholy, but not overdone. Very well written--thanks for sharing!

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kirinin December 27 2009, 17:48:14 UTC
This is amazing. I enjoyed Miko's and Zelenka's sections especially.

-K

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