Achilles Heel by Sethoz [Slave Challenge]

[sethoz]

Title: Achilles Heel
Author: sethoz
Characters/Pairing: Gen, everyone, with a tiny, tiny hint of McKay/Sheppard
Rating: UK 12
Words: 1182
Genre: Angst/Drama - probally an AU as I created back stories for some of the characters.
Notes: klo_the_hobbit was my beta as always. Set sometime in season one, near The Seige. This is not the story I wanted to write for this

Comments

[fleurrochard]

Wow. That was - wow. *speechless*

[sethoz]

*blushes* thanks.

[porntestpilot]

I second that- just wow. That was insane.

[sethoz]

*blushes some more* I'm going to be permently red at this rate... ;)

Thanks!

[porntestpilot]

Tis a good look on you I think. :D

[sethoz]

heh, red is not a good look. Unless it's cranberry and it's worn by Rodney...

[cold_poet]

That was really moving. Breathtaking really.

Nicely done.

[sethoz]

Thank you so much.

[lauralaitaine]

Wow. I liked this very much, it's very powerful, very evocative.

She didn't understand, how he needed to touch the stars, to understand them, to feel their brightness on his face, burning away everything.

I loved this line so much, it just... wow.

Thank you for sharing.

[sethoz]

Thank you, I tried to make every paragrah different and powerful in it's own way and it's great to know it worked!

Rodney needs hugs. [That is fast becomeing my manta ;)]

[anonymous]

Lovely. I liked how you reconciled the different sides of Ford we've seen on the show, the playful kid and the tough Marine who likes to blow stuff up. And I always like Weir pondering her leadership and Beckett dealing with being CMO.