Achilles Heel by Sethoz [Slave Challenge]

[sethoz]

Title: Achilles Heel
Author: sethoz
Characters/Pairing: Gen, everyone, with a tiny, tiny hint of McKay/Sheppard
Rating: UK 12
Words: 1182
Genre: Angst/Drama - probally an AU as I created back stories for some of the characters.
Notes: klo_the_hobbit was my beta as always. Set sometime in season one, near The Seige. This is not the story I wanted to write for this

Comments

[ellex42]

That was incredible. Truly incredible. You captured something very real within each character.

[sethoz]

*is bright red* thank you, I was a bit worried that becasue I created back stories for some characters, people wouldn't like it as much...

[direaliete]

Lovely! Reading it, I got the same feeling as by listening to Beethoven's 5th :)

[sethoz]

hee, love your icon!

And thankies, I always try to make my stories feel like music, some just work better than others ;)

[direaliete]

Thanks :)

And keep writing ;)

[canadian_snoopy]

*Wow*, I love how you managed to tell a little story about each character in a paragraph, short and sweet and still managing to pack a kick.

Wow.

Excellent stuff, thanks for sharing!

[sethoz]

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it, I was slightly worried that the stories were *too* short and that they wouldn't work, do its good to know they managed to create feelings. :)

[casspeach]

Oh this challenge is throwing up some fabulous insights. Love the looks into everyone's minds, driving forces here, each one very affecting and well-conveyed.

[sethoz]

Thanks, I really enjoyed writing some driving force for Peter in particular, there isn't enough fic out there about it.

[neery]

I love fics about the dark places in people's history and in their mind, and you wrote it so well! I liked Rodney's best, but all the backgrounds were both interesting and touching.

[sethoz]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.