What Comes Around (busaikko, PG, first aid challenge)

[busaikko]

Title: What Comes Around
Author: busaikko
Rating: PG for medical stuff; Gen (or should I say Genii?)
Summary: S2 AU. Imagine Médecins Sans Frontières. . . the Pegasus version.
A/N: Why, yes, there *is* a story that comes after this. . . *hunches over keyboard*

Comments

[naye]

Oh, wow, this was cool! Love the look at Pegasus cultures working together against the Wraith, and the story all wrapped up in official numbers and terse language. The letter from Ladon's cousin manages to say so much about Genii culture and life in the Pegasus galaxy, and the last transmission just makes me smile. Awesome fic!

[busaikko]

Thank you! I like to think that there is a complex social culture in Pegasus (and that the Genii are a big part of it). Glad it's not just me!

[busaikko]

Well.... One of the very first McShepics I wrote is the story that was supposed to come after. But I never finished it, and then I started cannibalizing it. Er. So it just haunts my hard drive.... *plays with concept, eats truffles*

[anatsuno]

oooooh. *chomps at the bit!* SO GOOD. *paws at screen* So evocative! and, uh, like, like -- like the start of something great!

Though I can almost see it be all she wrote, and yeah, that'd work, too.

[busaikko]

Heh! So you want the rest? Haven't I harmed John enough for you?... *evil grin* (I do have the rest of the story, but it's old and dusty and dismembered. *ponders*)

[anatsuno]

I think you harmed john enough, but I know I (and he) can take more... and I really do want to see what else goes with it, yes. Disjointed bits can be okay too!

I trust you. :)

[gaffsie]

Oooooooh, and there will be more about green-eyed mystery man? It's like Christmas has come early, or something.

I love getting a look at Pegasus culture through their own official documents. It's so terse and real.

[busaikko]

I love Pegasus culture! There needs to be more of it! *contemplates Stargate: Atlantis -- The Office!*

But are his eyes green? I am rotten with eye colours, but to me they're more... greyish? *ponders* There used to be more about this story... it's a ragged mess, though, sadly!

[gaffsie]

So far, I've seen them described as green, hazel, grey, grey-green, hazel-green, and once, brown. Mostly, I just think they're pretty. ;)

[busaikko]

Heh, pretty yes! But then again, I'm biased:

[ceitie]

Awesometastic is the only word I can use to describe this. I love the letter from Ladon's cousin the best, but medical reports are also incredibly well-done. I hope you post the next part soon!

[busaikko]

Thank you! *g* I'll get on it.....