What Comes Around (busaikko, PG, first aid challenge)

[busaikko]

Title: What Comes Around
Author: busaikko
Rating: PG for medical stuff; Gen (or should I say Genii?)
Summary: S2 AU. Imagine Médecins Sans Frontières. . . the Pegasus version.
A/N: Why, yes, there *is* a story that comes after this. . . *hunches over keyboard*

Comments

[sageness]

oh, very cool. *looks forward to what comes after*

[busaikko]

Thank you! *works*

[zoniduck]

Oooooooh... Yes, more of this, please! Thank you so much for sharing this. :-)

[busaikko]

Thanks for reading! *works*

[sholio]

Oh wow, I simply don't have enough praise for this! I adore docufic and outsider POVs, and I simply love the medical forms, the non-Earth units of measurement, the glimpses of a galactic culture that is quietly doing its own thing without Atlantis being involved at all. And I also love how John's part in the story is revealed in small glimpses, and we have to put the pieces together.

[busaikko]

Heh! The non-Earth measurements were very useful -- my very own medico-babble! (Though the temperature was straight Kelvin *cheats*) I like to think that the Pegasus society is more advanced than we see. Colour me hopeful, I guess! Thanks for reading!

[xparrot]

Ahh, such fic is almost a little painful, in a 'what might have been' way - complexity of cultures the show will never give us, when there's so much vast potential. But fascinating! and I love the glimpse of Ladon, and his cousin (he's such an awesome char, really...)

[busaikko]

Yes, it would be lovely to see real functioning Pegasus intercultural exchanges and things.... Ah, well! (And I do like Ladon myself!)

[tatsumaki]

Mmm, documentation fic! This reveals so much and yet tells tantalizingly little. I look forward to whatever may follow!

[busaikko]

Thank you! I'll try to follow up....