Trial By Fire by wildcat88 [Burning Up Challenge]

[wildcat88]

Title:  Trial by Fire
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Comments

[jennytork]

This was incredibly good!

[wildcat88]

Thank you! Glad you liked it.

[fullygoldy]

This is really excellent. My heart twisted up a couple of times early on, and I almost quit, it seemed so dark. The clues that saved John were what kept me going too. And then Yay! Happy ending!

[wildcat88]

Thanks so much! I'm thrilled you stuck with it. I really like dark (does it show?). :) Thanks for reading and taking time to comment.

[valleya]

Great story! You have a truly twisted, evil mind and I love everything about it! LOL! Keep writing and I'll keep reading!

[wildcat88]

Hee! If you think that was twisted, you should have seen the parts I left out. *evil grin* Glad you liked it.

[rhymer23]

Oh, I really like this! It was confusing at first - in a good, intriguing way - and then when it became clear what was happening, very chilling (which is the wrong word to use, given the heat/fire theme of the story, but I can't think of another one ;-) Poor, poor Sheppard. But since despite all this horror, he didn't give in, and he'll get over it, and won't be broken.

[wildcat88]

Thanks so much! I'm thrilled you liked it. And chilling is a great word. :)

[linzi5]

Wonderful! Poor Sheppard. I really liked the way the story built up until we knew what was going on. It made for very effective story telling. Well done! :)

[wildcat88]

Eeee! Thanks! My lovely beta, kristen999 deserves mucho credit for the story build up. Good to hear it worked and that you enjoyed it.