Trial By Fire by wildcat88 [Burning Up Challenge]

[wildcat88]

Title:  Trial by Fire
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Comments

[loriel_eris]

Loved this!

Surprisingly, it wasn't Ford that had me questioning that this was real, but this line:

The jumper slid slowly off its ledge and into the lava. John ripped the radio from his ear, silencing the shouts of his team. The nose hit, the front window cracked, and magma rushed in.

I think this was the point that I decided that this was VR/hallucinations/something like that.

His team hadn’t left his side since they returned.

*loves Team so very much* *g*

[wildcat88]

They are a lovely team, aren't they. I'm so happy you liked the story. And I'm thrilled to pieces that Ford wasn't the complete give away but that John ignoring his team was.

Thanks for reading!

[karri_kln1671]

That was intense. Poor guy! I like the way his brain tried to give him little clues that it wasn't real. *claps*

[wildcat88]

Thank you so much! John's too tough to give in easily.

I love that icon!

[witchofthedogs]

*nods*

Yes.

[wildcat88]

Thanks!

[padawan_aneiki]

Ohh wow! That was just...intense has been used but I can't think of a better word...Well done, very well done.

[wildcat88]

Thanks hon! Intense works for me. :)

[kriadydragon]

That rocked. The beginning totally threw me and I was literally on the edge of my seat the entire time. That was an excellent read.

[wildcat88]

Hee! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. It's rare that I throw you so I'm doubly chuffed. :)