Sisyphus, by rhymer23 (Not Dead Yet challenge)

Mar 07, 2008 08:09

Title: Sisyphus
Author: Eildon Rhymer (rhymer23Rating: PG-13 ( Read more... )

author: rhymer23, challenge: not dead yet

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anonymous March 7 2008, 10:08:36 UTC
ooooohhhhh wooowwww!

Just.....wow.

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rhymer23 March 7 2008, 17:57:57 UTC
Glad you liked it! :-)

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clarkangel March 7 2008, 10:55:26 UTC
Fantastic! Seriously. Utterly fantastic! You sucked me right in and now I'm gonna go in the corner and huggle Shep.

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rhymer23 March 7 2008, 17:58:50 UTC
Thanks! Though I want to huggle Shep. *pouts* (Strangely, he seems to be shying away from me at the moment.) ;-)

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x_erikah_x March 7 2008, 11:47:24 UTC
Wow! Mindblowing craziness!!! Hazy Shep thinking he's going nuts! Not!Dead teamates! Great story!

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rhymer23 March 7 2008, 18:00:00 UTC
Thanks! Almost-but-not-quite crazy Shep is always fun to write, so this one was a joy to write from beginning to end.

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trystings March 7 2008, 12:19:46 UTC
Excellent! So very very excellent. And I always love the aftermath in your stories, when things are back to normal, but not quite because it takes a while (as it should).

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rhymer23 March 7 2008, 18:00:58 UTC
Thanks! I never can bring myself to do a "happily ever after" ending. Life isn't like that. I can manage hopeful, and I can manage happy... but I can't manage "unchanged and entirely back to normal." The sort of stuff fanfic characters go through would change anybody

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mrshamill March 7 2008, 17:16:38 UTC
What a great story! A fascinating subject done really, really well, and your voices (particularly Sheppard's) were so good, just perfect. Lovely!

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rhymer23 March 7 2008, 18:01:26 UTC
Thanks! I really enjoyed writing this one, so I'm glad you enjoyed it. The idea just struck me from nowhere, and I saw the entire story vividly in a flash.

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