Games of Chance by X-parrot (second verse challenge) 2/2

[xparrot]

Title: Games of Chance
Author: xparrot

Part 1

Comments

[numena]

This was just the best thing I've read in ages. Brilliant.

[xparrot]

*blushes* Thank you!

Oh. My. God.

[linziday]

I have no words to express how completely and utterly excellent that was. It was perfect. Amazing. The coolest story I have read in a very long time. A fabulous concept wonderfully written.

Holy cow. Brilliant!

Re: Oh. My. God.

[xparrot]

Wow, thank you, I am so glad you enjoyed it!

[ratcreature]

This was great. I love the frantic, desperate pace of it.

[xparrot]

Thank you!

[_la_la_la]

So very, very awesome! Great plot & characterizations - loved how you pulled it together at the end.

[xparrot]

I'm so glad the end worked for you - thank you!

[americanleaguer]

So, this could totally be an episode, if the writers were at all cool.

Alas, they're not quite that cool, so hurrah for us getting to read it on the internet!

(multiverse cosmology is a bitch; the techno-patter here worked just fine)

[xparrot]

Man, I'd love to actually write for this show. The thought of writing dialogue and technobabble that DH would say...eee! *shivers*

I love the idea of the multiverse, but I soon get lost trying to understand the actual theory behind it. Wikipedia is my friend when it comes to the vocab, but I fear sounding like a total idiot to someone who actually gets it!

[americanleaguer]

Seriously, imagine seeing him read lines that you wrote... that should be every writer's goal, right there. :P

I wouldn't say that I really understand it (neither astrophysics nor cosmology is my particular field), but I better-than-Wikipedia understand it (fucking pre-reqs), and I wasn't reading this story going, "Well shit, I've just been thrown right out of the fic because of this blatantly hideous Science." So: win.