Absolution, by Miss Pamela

Apr 25, 2005 22:50

Title: Absolution
Author: Miss Pamela
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Summary: "The first two times, it had all been so fast and frantic, they hadn't even really gotten to enjoy it."

Angsty moody little thing that came out of nowhere. Thanks to the_star_fish for her ultra-quick beta!

Absolution )

author: misspamela, challenge: darkness

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aithine April 26 2005, 02:59:02 UTC
Rodney thought about Swamp Things and Wraith and Kolya, and about how Kolya was scarier than Wraith somehow, and how Sheppard had met Kolyas before there was even an active Stargate on Earth. Before nightmares became real.

Love this. (Love it all.) Marvelous job as usual. :)

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misspamela April 26 2005, 21:19:35 UTC
Wow, thank you!

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frostfire_17 April 26 2005, 03:06:33 UTC
Oh, wow. This was great. I love stories that go sequentially like that (i.e., "the first time they did it..." or whatever) and this was definitely an excellent example of the breed. Very IC, very well-written, and I have no idea how you packed that much goodness into such a small space. *sits back and contemplates*
Anyway. Goooood.

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misspamela April 26 2005, 21:20:31 UTC
I never really thought about it, but I have a thing for those kind of stories too. Thank you so much for reading!

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sprat April 26 2005, 03:23:52 UTC
Oh, this is cool. And also very hot. Funny, that. :)

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misspamela April 26 2005, 21:20:50 UTC
Hee! Thank you.

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fenris_wolf0 April 26 2005, 03:56:03 UTC
Short and sweet. And:

"It's amazing how that's not actually a compliment."

Heh. The dialog was great and you managed to put a lot in a very short story...

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terrie01 April 26 2005, 13:36:03 UTC
My favorite line, as well. So perfectly encapsulates their relationship.

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misspamela April 26 2005, 21:25:42 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

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misspamela April 26 2005, 21:25:17 UTC
Thank you so much!

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cathexys April 26 2005, 04:16:51 UTC
oh...so much heavy stuff and fun and lightness rtight next to each other. breathing life into him and sheppard meeting kolyas right next to how that's not actually a compliment...wonderful!
thank you!!!

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misspamela April 26 2005, 21:26:27 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad the balance worked.

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