Inundation by ltlj (Strange New Worlds & Alien Geography Challenge)

[ltlj]

Title: Inundation
Author: ltlj
Rating: PG13, Gen, 3200 words
Disclaimer: Don't own anything, no money made.

Summary: The flood and the subsequent mudslide that had buried the gate were pretty bad, but at least the rain had stopped. And nobody was dead.

ETA: lenkti did a great manip for the story here.

Comments

[teenygozer]

...AND JOHN HAS MADE A NEW FRIEND!!!

This is a lovely entry for the challenge.

[ltlj]

Thanks!

[soapbox_solo38]

This was great; from the archaeologists to the flying aliens to Rodney's "If we don't get out here today, I'm going to let you kill me". It emphasizes the point that there's so much that they simply can't stop and wonder at because of the Wraith. The language is beautiful, as are the descriptions, and it feels like we're really there. Lovely. :)

["But I feel this tent has a better chance of survival."]

[ltlj]

Thanks very much, glad you liked it! :)

[cupidsbow]

What an awesome water action scene! Thank you.

[ltlj]

Thanks! :)

[wickedwords]

Snakes! And the poor jumper. And Zelenka sneaking into their tent. Just totally awesome, all of it.

[ltlj]

Thanks very much! :)

[amothea]

Yikes, I loved this story! though the giant snake was actually pretty scary.

[ltlj]

Thanks! :)