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Keeping Doctor Meredith, by Ellex [Villains Challenge]

Mar 26, 2007 23:39

Keeping Doctor Meredith
By ellex42Gen (but could be pre-slash/pre-het ( Read more... )

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justabi March 27 2007, 07:19:48 UTC

Eeei! I love it. Kolya so totally missed out on keeping Rodney there. He would have fallen in love and ended up forcing Rodney to have his babies and teaching them to build nuclear weapons. In an icky noncon kinda way that I'm really glad didn't happen. ooookay. ANyway, I love it.

ellex42 March 27 2007, 16:14:50 UTC

Wah! I thought about something like that, and just couldn't write it. Besides, I really wanted the scene with Kolya in hiding, and realizing that he's had McKay all along, and missing his chance at Sheppard.

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

ellex42 March 27 2007, 16:15:30 UTC

Also, I <3 your icon!

burntcopper March 27 2007, 12:47:49 UTC

you are disturbing and bad and do it again, you know you want to.

ellex42 March 27 2007, 16:19:19 UTC

*snicker* I do, I do want to do it again. I'm so obvious!

Thank you!

canadian_plant March 27 2007, 13:19:56 UTC

Great story! I do like Kolya as a character, and you wrote him well. I also enjoyed the premise. I hope somebody DOES run with it, because you've started something interesting.

ellex42 March 27 2007, 16:25:08 UTC

Thank you!

Stress reaction? Nah. rattlecatcher March 27 2007, 14:55:57 UTC

Manly terror, thank you very much. :)

Re: Stress reaction? Nah. ellex42 March 27 2007, 16:26:41 UTC

LOL, wouldn't you be freaked out, too? Especially since, for Rodney, this assault would be completely unexpected.

Glad you enjoyed it!

Re: Stress reaction? Nah. helva2260 March 28 2007, 12:36:59 UTC

Oh, hell yeah to the freaked out and unexpectedness!

I really loved Rodney's moment of wonderment when Kolya calls him pretty, before he remembers where he is, and who's saying it, and that actually he shouldn't be flattered because he's still a man underneath... *g*

I am also in awe of how you managed to make it very clear to us that it was Rodney (although for the first paragraph I was wondering if it was Jeannie) through his body language and nervous habits, while writing it purely as Kolya's observations and his nagging sense of familiarity. Wonderful, just wonderful.

Re: Stress reaction? Nah. ellex42 March 29 2007, 02:28:29 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and that it was clear to you from the start that 'Doctor Meredith' was Rodney - that was something I'd worried about while writing it.

ozsaur March 27 2007, 14:59:56 UTC

I love that Rodney fainted. And he'd never let John know about it-- until it accidentally slipped out. Then John would go ballistic!

I hope you do follow up on this story, such an intriguing idea and you hit about fifteen of my creepy-but-so-so-good buttons.

ellex42 March 27 2007, 16:27:26 UTC

Oh good, I like hitting people's buttons! I'll certainly think about continuing or expanding this.