Comments | sga_flashfic: Lacunae, by Frostfire

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Lacunae, by Frostfire

Apr 09, 2005 18:32

Title: Lacunae
Author: Frostfire
Pairing: Sheppard/McKay, preslash
Rating: PG-13
Notes: I really, really want to spend another hour or so editing this. But I also really, really want to post another 38 Minutes story. So...you get this. Yes, I know it could be better.
Summary: "What the hell are you doing here?"

( Lacunae )

challenge: 38 minutes, author: frostfire

Comments 31

malnpudl April 10 2005, 01:47:00 UTC

Oh, that was just wonderful. :-)

frostfire_17 April 10 2005, 03:58:43 UTC

*grins* Thanks.

davechicken April 10 2005, 01:48:52 UTC

Hee. Cute. Poor Rodney and his not-resting. *pets him* And his poor leg too! *pets that*

Silly Shep. They both need a thwack around the ear at times, IMHO.

Thanks for this :)

frostfire_17 April 10 2005, 04:00:51 UTC

Rodney: Rest? What is this *rest* of which you speak? *aside* Miko! Where's my coffee?

*grins* You're entirely welcome.

davechicken April 10 2005, 09:40:12 UTC

Heh, my Rodney's the same, poor boy. He's such a silly thing.

thecomfychair April 10 2005, 02:22:01 UTC

aaaw that was cute.

frostfire_17 April 10 2005, 04:01:25 UTC

awwww thank you.

minnow1212 April 10 2005, 02:41:50 UTC

This was really fun.

>Rodney waves a hand. “I think I know this place better than you do, Major, no matter how much it sits up and begs for your DNA. I’m perfectly safe.” Something in the wall gives off an enormous spark, and they both jump back, managing to avoid possibly-breakable parts this time. “Ironic cosmic timing notwithstanding. Go reconnaisse.”<

Heh. Great Rodney voice.

frostfire_17 April 10 2005, 04:03:04 UTC

Thanks!

I was proud of myself for making up the word "reconnaisse". Because it should be reconnoiter...but Busy!Rodney doesn't care!

teaphile April 10 2005, 07:15:32 UTC

Actually, 'reconnaisse' would be a natural mistake for an anglophone Canadian who's had about six years of French class to make. So, nice going there. I had to look it up, myself.

frostfire_17 April 10 2005, 07:37:58 UTC

Heh, yes. I was thinking about the etymology--the root would be what, reconnaitre? (Which doesn't quite make sense in context--how are you "re-knowing" something you've never seen before?) So, "reconnais", or appropriate conjugation, would be the verb...

Aaaaand I'm a nerd. Right. Anyway, glad you liked it!

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tigs April 10 2005, 03:25:50 UTC

Totally fun. You just know they've got to be going stir-crazy, same city, same people every day. And they should definitely get away together. :)

frostfire_17 April 10 2005, 04:08:02 UTC

Oh, they really, really should. Actually, I think shalott wrote a fic where they did..."Can't Have One Without The Other". Mmmm, honeymoons...

Ahem. Glad you liked it!