Comments | sga_flashfic: A Bad Beginning by BeccaFran: exhaustion challenge

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A Bad Beginning by BeccaFran: exhaustion challenge

Jun 14, 2006 23:56

Title: A Bad Beginning
Author: BeccaFran, aka r_becca
Pairing: Ronon/Teyla
Rating: PG-13
Length: ~1700 words
Spoilers: Season 2 episodes including "Runner," "Trinity," "Lost Boys," "Conversion," "Aurora," "Inferno"
Summary: There is a saying among Teyla's people which says a bad beginning makes a bad ending. She cannot help but cling to her father's old ( Read more... )

Comments 34

lallybroch June 15 2006, 14:11:18 UTC

Yay for you writing SGA! I tend not to read Teyla fics because she's so hard to get right, but *this* is so lovely and so in character. Really nice. :-)

flyingcarpet June 15 2006, 14:48:03 UTC

Aw, thank you -- what a great compliment. :)

I'll try to work on something that's more up your alley soon. *grins*

lallybroch June 15 2006, 14:50:26 UTC

Eeeeee! I can't wait! ;-)

hth_the_first June 15 2006, 16:14:28 UTC

Really great Teyla voice. I think she does value her self-control enough to make it a difficult journey for her to be vulnerable with somebody, and you designed that journey perfectly. Thanks!

flyingcarpet June 15 2006, 17:46:52 UTC

Thank you. :)

merelyn June 15 2006, 18:28:27 UTC

Oh, this is wonderful! I love Teyla/Ronon, and I love the way you sketch out their relationship. Great Teyla voice, too.

flyingcarpet June 15 2006, 18:34:53 UTC

Thanks!

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flyingcarpet June 15 2006, 20:44:42 UTC

Thank you. :)

purna June 15 2006, 23:36:14 UTC

This was lovely. This -- She does not walk on quiet feet through the halls, and she does not enter Ronon's bed-chamber, and she does not trace his warm skin with her hands or taste the skin of his neck beneath the tattoo. -- made me shiver.

flyingcarpet June 15 2006, 23:49:26 UTC

Thank you -- I'm glad to know it worked for you. :)