Ephemeral by Purna (Sex, Drugs, and Rock and Roll)

[purna]

Ephemeral by purna
McKay/Sheppard
~1,800 words
R
Summary: Alien pollen. Yeah.

Comments

[lilac_way]

The sense imagery you used is amazing. I can literally feel the heat and the breeze.

Also? "Alien bong circle" is the best line ever.

[purna]

That pleases me SO much. I'm really addicted to intense sense imagery, both writing it and reading it, so I'm glad that came through here.

Hee, glad you liked it!

[archerlass]

I need a lazy warm day in the worst way right now. This was a LOT of fun, and the dialog for each character sounded spot on. :)

[purna]

Oh, yeah. I love heat. Give me summer and sun and heat and I'm one happy girl. I didn't realize how much that came though in this, but I'm glad it did.

Thanks!

[ladyagnew]

As lethargic and easy as a warm spring day, and almost as pretty. What I like is how even though the couples split into twos, the dominating emotion is togetherness and connection between the four, and everything overlaid with affection. I like how you write them all liking one another.

[purna]

I really wanted the team connection to come though, so it pleases me to hear that.

Glad you liked it!

[auburnnothenna]

Makes me want to go stand under my apple tree and listen to the beesong. It's langourous and sweet.

[purna]

Wow, thanks. That's a lovely image, listening to beesong.

Thanks!

[sarren]

Pretty imagery.

Also, team bonding! Yay!

[purna]

Thanks!