i hope you take seriously, by SomeInstant (S, D, and R&R Challenge)

[someinstant]

i hope you take seriously the suggestion of undressing
by SomeInstant

Summary: It had seemed like such a nice planet. Steady job, good provider, nice house-- the kind of planet your mother would like you to date, if your mother were insane and indifferent to the idea of grandchildren.
Rating: a light and pleasant R, McKay/Sheppard
Spoilers: Vague

Comments

[lamardeuse]

Whee! Loved this a lot.

[someinstant]

Excellent. :D

[stormheller]

Well done!
Thanks,
~ Stormy

[someinstant]

You're entirely welcome, and I'm glad you liked the story. :)

[percysowner]

This was a great story to start with this morning! Stoned Rodney and John are so funny.

[someinstant]

Mm. I agree. Every morning should start off with drugged-John-an'-Rodney. I would be much more willing to listen to my alarm clock if I knew they were lolling about in my kitchen, ready to entertain me with their stoned proclamations.

[wpadmirer]

I loved John's thoughts all the way through this. Everything just sounded SO John.

And Rodney's reactions were perfection.

Thank you!

WP

[someinstant]

You're very welcome.

I'm thinking about having an affair with John's thought process. It's just so weird and compelling and non-linear.

[kitkat3979]

The funny thing is that Elizabeth reminds me of my mum - a lot. So the mom-hair was inspired (and Rodney would actually be tactless enough to say it).

The hands-free sex was great.

[someinstant]

Thanks! I'm happy you liked the story. :)

(and Rodney would actually be tactless enough to say it)

"What?" Rodney said. Elizabeth's face had shifted into her diplomatic mask, and Teyla looked, of all things, disappointed. The Colonel was making violent, unintelligible hand motions and glowering at him, and. That was just unacceptable.

"What?" Rodney asked again. "Stop gesticulating, Sheppard, you'll strain something. It was a perfectly legitimate observation, Colonel, and meant in the spirit of constructive criticism, and if-- oh ow, OW, you heathen, you've shattered my tibia!"